Wow like how you state the narrator know she loves him but he can don't have her till he is down which make him wish to write more so it takes I'm further from bwing done and from her. This is very powerful. He wishes to love her but only knows of one way. That way he know just can not be done for some reason unknown to the reader. He wishes to find a different way for the love he has is forbade by that reason. It is a iner struggle between ones desires and what one can have. He wishestablished to love her but doestrogen not know how. So you both yore for each other but something or someone is keeping you apart. And you wish for that to end which means time is standing in your way. But you can wait but you do not wish to wait. I to know this feeling it has past now I may love the one I crave but that's because time passed. So you to will be able to love the one who you so dearly love if you have not already. I love how you used words that have a deep feel to them. This was a wonderful read. I loved it so much. Keep on working to gain your love and writing. Thank you for sharing!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
It is the timing and I'm glad to hear you and your beloved have been able to hold on to that love. T.. read moreIt is the timing and I'm glad to hear you and your beloved have been able to hold on to that love. The woman I speak on, we have been knowing each other for eight years now, but we both know we are soul mates. Just patiently waiting for the timing to be right.
Your analysis was dead on.
I wonder how you know to call me anna...and you spelt it right...
7 Years Ago
The spirits told me hehe jk
It's in your profile name annlysiar, so I figured your name was A.. read moreThe spirits told me hehe jk
It's in your profile name annlysiar, so I figured your name was Anna. ;D
7 Years Ago
Lol perceptive. 😉
7 Years Ago
Just a tad bit.
7 Years Ago
It's ok everyone has their moments. The spirits go a long way😉
7 Years Ago
Too long if you ask me...
7 Years Ago
Lol what would make you say that??
7 Years Ago
Don't get me wrong, I hold tremendous patience, but I just always seek greatness and love things to .. read moreDon't get me wrong, I hold tremendous patience, but I just always seek greatness and love things to come to life sooner than later...
7 Years Ago
The greatest and most beautiful magics take time.
As does perfrction. Hence the saying: good .. read moreThe greatest and most beautiful magics take time.
As does perfrction. Hence the saying: good things come to those who wait. Or patience is a virtue.
And great things sometimes come in the smallest gestures. Rather than grand ones😉
7 Years Ago
Yes indeed, the small gestures is what I'm all about these days...
This is a great piece of work. As I got to the end a grin emerged on my face, which is what I love when I read, I love to have emotion drawn out of me. I really look forward to reading more of your work.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you Nathaniel, it is my pleasure and I'm glad that I was able to get such a reaction out of yo.. read moreThank you Nathaniel, it is my pleasure and I'm glad that I was able to get such a reaction out of you!
Wow like how you state the narrator know she loves him but he can don't have her till he is down which make him wish to write more so it takes I'm further from bwing done and from her. This is very powerful. He wishes to love her but only knows of one way. That way he know just can not be done for some reason unknown to the reader. He wishes to find a different way for the love he has is forbade by that reason. It is a iner struggle between ones desires and what one can have. He wishestablished to love her but doestrogen not know how. So you both yore for each other but something or someone is keeping you apart. And you wish for that to end which means time is standing in your way. But you can wait but you do not wish to wait. I to know this feeling it has past now I may love the one I crave but that's because time passed. So you to will be able to love the one who you so dearly love if you have not already. I love how you used words that have a deep feel to them. This was a wonderful read. I loved it so much. Keep on working to gain your love and writing. Thank you for sharing!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
It is the timing and I'm glad to hear you and your beloved have been able to hold on to that love. T.. read moreIt is the timing and I'm glad to hear you and your beloved have been able to hold on to that love. The woman I speak on, we have been knowing each other for eight years now, but we both know we are soul mates. Just patiently waiting for the timing to be right.
Your analysis was dead on.