Shalla-Bal

Thee Silver Surfer

Sir Norrin Radd

Sacrificed

                Myself,

                          Love,

                                   And my home…

My Shalla-Bal!

Mrs. Deja-Vu

No Voodoo- Just the Power Cosmic.

OuterSp @    [     e            s      hit.

I’m possessed with it.

It being her.

The breathing in my mind;

I’m ever alive!

Author's Note

Abracadabara
I create as I speak



Battle-Star-Galactica Heart/Love,
Novela,
Gothspel-Poetry,
Done-with-Secular-Poerty,
Are-U-Still-Down,
Magik

Reviews

[Quinn W]

I loved the wording! Especially the format of the poem! I must say I didn't understand it in the way you wrote it to be understood, but it did speak to me in another way. I love poems that be interpreted in different ways by different people! I really like the "Sacrifice" line. It's probably my favorite! Loved your poem!

[sinNsincerity]

And that's what I strive for, for it to speak to you as you take it, not on what I imply...
It's easy to make you think and see what I want, but I think it's more special when you begin to find meaning on your own....
I'm really glad you enjoyed it Quinn!

[Tessa Melendez]

Creatively written. Interesting piece. I don't know these references. All I can say is that you have found an interesting way to create an equally interesting piece.

[sinNsincerity]

It's all good,Thank you for reading Tessa.

[Tessa Melendez]

Oh, wait. Now I get the references. I should've read it over. I got it now. I feel dumb.

[sinNsincerity]

Don't feel dumb, you're awesome

[Marianne Rose]

Not familiar with the references, I read it just as it appears, without context, and feel a mysterious aura surrounding the poem. The lines that intrigue me most "the breathing in my mind, I'm ever alive" seems surprising after such great sacrifice. And yes, I want to know more- this is just a taste of this story that intrigues me. Thank you.

[sinNsincerity]

I think when we lose something that we cherished; we'll do whatever it takes for just a glimpse...

[GalaxyGhost]

This is very creative and the format reflects that well.

[sinNsincerity]

Thanks for thinking so.

[moonlit_cove]

I think this is great. I love how I can look at it several times and interpret something slightly different each time. This is especially true for the OuterSp... line. I can see multiple ways to read that line. Art at its most basic definition. Great work!

[richieb]

I do not fully understand your poem but i do like your style and the flow of your words. Poetry is art and does not have to be conventional. Expressing your feelings as you write i do understand.
Peace,
Richie b.

[sinNsincerity]

Most definitely understandable with all due respect. There's lots of thingstuff I don't understand. Even the poetry I write itself... they're just words and phrases I use to gain some understanding of my life and hopefully some people would look at them and get something out of it.

[Samantha Jenkins]

Interesting, I will not lie I do not understand it. The space section is really confusing.

Could you explain?

[sinNsincerity]

It's me finally breaking free from the dreamweaver itso five senses that keep us confined to a singular and false reality.
My 3rd eye magik that I was granted as a child. No black magik though. I don't play with that. My faith in Jerusalem would be a former of this magik, but there's different forms that I access. May sound weird., but it is real.

[Samantha Jenkins]

Ah, I get it kind of know. I don't know about Magik, I have wanted to get into it but it takes time and research. I have not really gotten into that yet. One day, I will research it all and see what is up.

[sinNsincerity]

Hehe it's all good, that's why I don't write for reviews because it is a lot to wrap your mind around. I more so like to hear what the words make people think and feel when they read them. I like that most.
I believe weed is a former of magik, prayer, love, etc... pretty much anything you can't touch with our physical being...music...poetry is very magical...women are very magikal. The most magikal of all...

[sinNsincerity]

*******form

[Samantha Jenkins]

I am not into weed anymore, but hey if that is what you like that's always good.

[sinNsincerity]

Weed is just one element and does not control me like most. All the other things I stated previously above produce the very own unique highs ad well. Have you never been inlove?

[Samantha Jenkins]

I can not say "in" love but I have loved.

[sinNsincerity]

Either way, that's Magikal.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words and thoughts my friend.
"Myself,
Love,
And my home…"
The poem made me want to read and know more.The above lines. Can we lose them and be sane? Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for your thoughts my friend, yeah, I sorta held back on this one, but it is just right where I want it to be!
I'm learning to be sane without all three, two are checked off, but love won't leave me alone...

[Coyote Poetry]

This is good. We need love in our life my friend. You are welcome.

[PhoenixDown]

Questions of loss & insanity are always enthralling. Nice examination Coyote.