Shalla-Bal

Thee Silver Surfer

Sir Norrin Radd

Sacrificed

                Myself,

                          Love,

                                   And my home…

My Shalla-Bal!

Mrs. Deja-Vu

No Voodoo- Just the Power Cosmic.

OuterSp @    [     e            s      hit.

I’m possessed with it.

It being her.

The breathing in my mind;

I’m ever alive!

Author's Note

Abracadabara
I create as I speak



Battle-Star-Galactica Heart/Love,
Novela,
Gothspel-Poetry,
Done-with-Secular-Poerty,
Are-U-Still-Down,
Magik

Reviews

[Quinn W]

I loved the wording! Especially the format of the poem! I must say I didn't understand it in the way you wrote it to be understood, but it did speak to me in another way. I love poems that be interpreted in different ways by different people! I really like the "Sacrifice" line. It's probably my favorite! Loved your poem!

[sinNsincerity]

And that's what I strive for, for it to speak to you as you take it, not on what I imply...
It's easy to make you think and see what I want, but I think it's more special when you begin to find meaning on your own....
I'm really glad you enjoyed it Quinn!

[Devious13]

sexy , rightful ,intriguing.. magikikul....llol

[sinNsincerity]

Really Magikul, Thank you Miss Devious!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

A game of words and what is poetry than a game with words, sounds, and characters. Well done, Sin of Sincerity. :) Rudi

[sinNsincerity]

Yes, yes, yes! Just the same way they built the pyramids. Thank you Rudi!

[Samantha Anabella]

This is definitely a type of poem I haven't seen before and its quite beautiful! I really like it especially when you say "It being her the breathing in my mind; I'm ever alive!" It demonstrates powerful words that come from a powerful mind. Have a good rest of your day!

[sinNsincerity]

It's all I think about. It being her. hehe
Thank you so much Samantha, I really appreciate it!
I really do try to be in a space of my own.

[PhoenixDown]

"The breathing in my mind;" -- this line was my favorite. I can follow this style. It feels like how I think. Appreciate the originality. I really do.

Rather a rise & then falling, this felt like a slow fall & then sudden rising. Also, the Silver Surfer is hella awesome.

Amazing write.

PhoenixDown

[sinNsincerity]

That's my third eye; and thank you, I appreciate you spending the time to it.
Yea, i love playing with juxtapositions, as well as, setting things up and then pulling back, so I can just watch it all fall apart in a sense.
He is very!
Thank you for reading PhoenixDown, I'm really stoked that you liked it.

[PhoenixDown]

Dismantling.... Ah yes, my friend. Almost nothing better.

[wordman]

sounds like a gypsy woman that put that spell on you ! they can wrap you up in a heart beat

[sinNsincerity]

I'm trap dude!!!

[aLittlePain]

The form here is so effective, elevates the mood.
So much here in the content can mean something different after every read.

Dope!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so!

[zaisham9393]

I enjoyed reading it .Thanks for sharing :))!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Zaisha, I'm glad that you did. Take care!

[Madi Bellon]

I love it. The line "I'm possessed with it." is really powerful. You wrote such a wonderful poem. :)

[sinNsincerity]

I really am! hehe
Thank you for thinking so Madi.

[Madi Bellon]

You're welcome!

[Pink Pastel]

It's okay^-^friend it's kinda short though.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Melissa.

[T. Edana Talbott]

This was really interesting, I like pieces like this because they're often open for various interpretations.
Thank you for inviting me to read this.

[sinNsincerity]

I would only hope so because I try to be as open as possible.
Thank you for reading Edana.