Shalla-Bal

Thee Silver Surfer

Sir Norrin Radd

Sacrificed

                Myself,

                          Love,

                                   And my home…

My Shalla-Bal!

Mrs. Deja-Vu

No Voodoo- Just the Power Cosmic.

OuterSp @    [     e            s      hit.

I’m possessed with it.

It being her.

The breathing in my mind;

I’m ever alive!

Author's Note

Abracadabara
I create as I speak



Battle-Star-Galactica Heart/Love,
Novela,
Gothspel-Poetry,
Done-with-Secular-Poerty,
Are-U-Still-Down,
Magik

Reviews

[Quinn W]

I loved the wording! Especially the format of the poem! I must say I didn't understand it in the way you wrote it to be understood, but it did speak to me in another way. I love poems that be interpreted in different ways by different people! I really like the "Sacrifice" line. It's probably my favorite! Loved your poem!

[sinNsincerity]

And that's what I strive for, for it to speak to you as you take it, not on what I imply...
It's easy to make you think and see what I want, but I think it's more special when you begin to find meaning on your own....
I'm really glad you enjoyed it Quinn!

[annalysiar]

Very creative. Great format

[Emily]

I really liked it!
Keep on writing!!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you did Emily.

[@JenniferNicholeAuthor]

I'm down. I like the style... your creative formatting works well for the feel of it ;) good job

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Jennifer, I really appreciate it. 2 down!

[Celie Rose]

Enjoyed reading your poem. "
"Sacrificed, Myself, Love, And my home…"
possessed by the cosmics,
how awe-inspiring the universe is.
intriguing, peeks curiosity and imagination
of where, when, how and why.
It is nicely written.
I also like the arrangement of words.
Keep up the good work!

[sinNsincerity]

That's God

[Raylene]

Very unique dear I love the wording and odd style very amazing work

[sinNsincerity]

I'm an odd individual hehe Thank you Raylene, I highly appreciate it!

[Raylene]

Anytime dear

[Davidgeo]

I forget to mention "outer space sh#t".... or how you adapted that line. It's a talent to swear originally.

(Honestly, I keep reading this because there is a shortage of comic book poetry, fill the niche if you can... I've tried, I cannot)

[sinNsincerity]

I don't take myself and relate it to other things; rather yet, I use other things to present who I am, so it would be a shame for me to write or cater to a particular genre or idea in itself...
I'm just not that person to fill a niche of any sort.

[Davidgeo]

So, you're filling that niche of the person who doesn't feel they fill a niche of any sort.... how cliché.

[sinNsincerity]

That's based on your perspective, and to call it cliche is a weak assumption. Go fill the hole yourself dude...

[Davidgeo]

Learn to take a joke, life is much easier that way and you won't look so silly and pretentious.

[Davidgeo]

I'd rather laugh with you but this morning I will settle for laughing at your less than stellar intellect.

[Susan 🦋]

Well WOW...cool piece....I liked " no voodoo just the power cosmic"....you sure have a way with words!!! enjoyed reading!!! very nicely done!! :-)))

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking get so; as well as, spending the time to read and leaving me your thoughts Susan, I really appreciate it. I found my phoenix and I'm giving her room to be free....

[AmandaFuller]

I liked the last stanza most. Good job!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Amanda, I'm glad that you did.

[AmandaFuller]

No problem!!

[Davidgeo]

The Rise of the Silver Surfer was one of the worst comic book movies in the history of recent comic book movies.... (early 90's and mid 80's not withstanding).


I really really liked this. I'm glad there are more nerd b*****s like me here.

It needs no critique... write some more stuff just like this.

[sinNsincerity]

yea, it was alright. Movie industry has taken a dive, I grew up on his wisdom from the comics as a child- or other being at some point or an other in space and time...

[Pryde Foltz]

Expansive and transcendent. The senses are taken for a ride:)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Pryde, I try to take the the readers beyond the five senses a tad bit, not too much yet...