Marsh-Mellowed Moans

Your caterpillar heart finally found a way to fly away from your withins.

Wait a sex!

Sec.

You left behind your sin

Have you forgot about him?

Wait!

You forgot me...

Your dandelion's vomited sun sets,

Which spoke of yesteryears and promises of your echo.

HelloOOOOOOHelLoooooHELLOOOOo???

Hell,

She has risen to a new level.

Untouchable you are...

Must I touch myself to heed the weeping welts

Of the void that you've infra- and ultrasonically sent forth?

Unable to hear you call within this human mind,

So I'm searching the nin9 after 6ix

69

The Capricorn to my Cancer!

Force will Awaken Perfection with Patience.

Opposing forces, but we both need stability...

evol tcefrep A

                         For one another.

You needed my tru-emotions for the passion

And the passion wasn't taken lightly when

You entered my intimacy.

Balancing the thawing with the lacking warmth.

Never questioning devotion

Because we met before actuality

With different circumstances.

Unexplainable,

But why do I only find you in the deep?

You're the obsessed lunatic;

Me = the clingy housewife.

And Karmic debt must be paid before

We can be happy together.

Let's find away

To ReLive our ancient love story

And mend the broken.

That once in a lifetime love.

Bellerose,

Save me!

Author's Note

~Bellerose~

Ask what you like if your dare...

Reviews

[Marianne Rose]

Such a journey into the mind- which moves from one thing to another, word associations creating streams that sometimes herald previously unknown connections. While obscure, this is an intriguing poem that wants to be read as fast as the mind that moves from one experience to another, links not always understood but there all the same. The poem comes into an integrated thought in the last several lines. The "save me!" Is a great ending. Thank you.

[sinNsincerity]

I've learn to do that by reading and studying William Faulkner. And Although it does move from one thing to another, with the acquired knowledge, experiences, and imagination, it is all interrelated.

Thank you Marianne, I'm constantly learning new things about the mind, heart, soul, and body God has allowed me to present to you all!

[Coyote Poetry]

A worthwhile read.
"We can be happy together.
Let's find away
To ReLive our ancient love story
And mend the broken.
That once in a lifetime love.
Bellerose,
Save me!"
The above lines are true. Real love find ways back to the days of bliss. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Mos Deff! Thank you for reading, I'm really glad those lines stood out to you Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

They did and you are welcome.

[Ruth]

The tension here is thrilling. Quite intoxicating :) I think I am going to read this again as it sends a shiver :)

[sinNsincerity]

And again and again please hehe Thank you Ruth, it's always such a pleasure to hear from you.

[RomaJ]

My. The tension is electrifying. It builds to a crescendo and keeps the momentum going. Makes me feel like I'm on a roller coaster, thinking of an old flame. Gives me shivers how that fire can be so easily rekindled, but that's a liability, I took great lengths to avoid. Lol. I definitely enjoyed reading this. The desire is explicitly expressed

[sinNsincerity]

That's great because my mission is to stir your feeling, insuchaway, that you don't relate to me but to yourself. And that's the Magik! Why avoid 'em?

[RomaJ]

It was a pleasure to read.


"Why avoid 'em?" hmm...To rekindle that fire would not only be volatile, but most likely fatal...long story...:)

[sinNsincerity]

I feel you; I've done the same...

[Raylene]

Toxic yet addictive is the words I would use to describe this

[sinNsincerity]

Toxic indeed, but will not contaminate...
;)

[Raylene]

Lol well then

[wordman]

you said a mouth full,sounds like you are trying to fix a fast and furious relationship..

[sinNsincerity]

Not quite furious or fast at all my friend. I'v acknowledge what I've always known about love and my heart. And that's that it has been a live for centuries and runs in cycles and I am patiently waiting...
Thank for reading my good friend!

[sinNsincerity]

I've always had Muses in these twenty-seven years, several, but now I realize the true-muse. My Shalla-Bal

[KLMazon]

As I read, I thought perhaps I mixed up my tabs and was actually on my homepage ;) I very much enjoyed this and the imagery of the dandelions will stick with me.

[sinNsincerity]

That's awesome to hear, I love the image of it too!!!

[Davidgeo]

Ha... that was pretty good. You're a classy perv. (at least I didn't call it unique like every other review here... thought I'd add that (( I only looked at two reviews)) thought i'd add that too) Like herpes.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm not a perv. Just experienced...

[Davidgeo]

Same difference

[Davidgeo]

Our profile pics are strangely similar while being profoundly different.

[Davidgeo]

Just a random observation...

[AmandaFuller]

This is very different. Great job on being unique.

[sinNsincerity]

it's my pleasure, Thank you Amanda!

[AmandaFuller]

No problem!

[GalaxyGhost]

Very interesting informative poetry as it was very unique.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so!