Zoems

Allow me to be the Lost of all your years.

I'm the lost of you.

Yes YOU!

It's true.

Allow me to be your missing truth

Like you're my missing rib.

Let me Sin,

Please my dear,

I'm Sincere.

My blues were never broken

Just bruises you took for misfortunes.

Panda Express cookies,

Not quite destiny,

But I keep on loving you...

No clues for the Treasure Island

My heart was a token.

The Hook to your Neverland,

But that didn't Pan out.

No help.

No formula for the potion

Just Voila

Like a prayer to God.

I was handed the scripture,

Which lead to her worship.

No poems written

Just soul smitten.

Smitten...

Love the light,

But driven to be alone.

Call that insight.

Who's he?

The new guy.

The nice guy.

The I don't give a f**k type,

But I'm bright,

So I bite

My tongue

With all my might.

I'm high

And I'm enjoying

My high.

Lead my way

through the night.

Lead my way

through the bright.

Lead my way

Outside the

Wrong and right.

Reviews

[Jesus & Gypsy Soul]

"My blues were never broken
Just bruises you took for misfortunes."

"The Hook to your Neverland- but that just didn't Pan out."

This poem reads so easily and beautifully, I am curious how natural this one came to you. I absolutely love this one!

[sinNsincerity]

Not natural at all, more like supernatural! Almost like a possession unexplainable feelings, thoughtso, and something I've yet to discover... To be honest, I never wanted to be a writer. I was on my way to be a chef when something inside or above me to me to stop everything I was do in life and to just start writing about whatever. It's hard to explain, I have basically dropped a life that I believed I was supposed to lead and have taken on writing full time. I don't even know why, but it feels so right. It's not like I sit down and say, "okay, imma write one this topic," something greater than I "God" I believe commands me to do so when the moment is right. Idk, I stop ask why and how and just do it....

[Robert Trakofler]

Impeccable rhythm to this song and great wordplay that has a very natural flow and as per your writing style very raw and true message in it

[Onlyme]

Superb, nothing else needed!

[sinNsincerity]

always........

[Onlyme]

maybe to you, for me happy. :)

[shyla]

This was wonderful! Humorous and lovely and made me awestruck :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Shyla, I;m so glad to hear so.

[shyla]

no problem :)

[Brooke]

This has such amazing flow. Reading it was almost a dreamy experience for me. I honestly got lost in it,I don't read many things that make me feel that way. Very talented

[sinNsincerity]

Wow, that's really amazing to hear that, I'm really glad. Thank you Brooke!

[Brooke]

No problem ! :)

[Lola_Bee]

Great work, the way the words unfold smoothly. Almost Rhythmic… Good Job

[Valentine]

Sounds like you really were up on cloud nine when you wrote this. I like your down to earth writes better. Valentine

[V]

This reads pretty lyrical, more like a song, maybe rap lyrics than a mere written piece. Modern, refreshing language. An entertaining read.

[sinNsincerity]

I would never try to rap, but thank you for that praise!
I just study literature from all its forms and understand what sound, rhythm, and tone can do to the mind. I guess you can call it modern, but I like to call it a small piece of me.
Thank you for spending the time to read Vanessa, I'm glad you'd enjoyed it!

[V]

I did. Maybe you should try out writing lyrics but whatever floats your boat. I like your description of it, though. You're welcome.

[sinNsincerity]

Maybe one day I will; I wouldn't shy away from the thought. I know song writers get paid big bucks 🤑

[V]

Haha, maybe some, well I didn't when I did in the past yet is was more of a favor, then. I stay away from writing lyrics now but continue to write poems (some with lyrical traits).

[V]

Ha no they don't. Wish you success for your future writings.

[sinNsincerity]

Likewise Vanessa!

[Phoen-ix]

I got goosebumps while reading this, and all I could picture was this spoken at a poetry night. This was beautiful.

[sinNsincerity]

That's pretty sweet, I got goosebumps when I wrote it...
People keep on trying to get me to go to poetry clubs and do spoken word, but I'm shy to the max!

[Celie Rose]

Enjoyable poem.
"Lead my way
Outside the
Wrong and right."
These last three lines
say it all.
when loving that special one
is involved.
Well written and expressed.

[sinNsincerity]

It was my pleasure, I'm glad you enjoyed it.