Queen of Gotham

I was in possession of her,

But I was the one who was possessed.

The progressiveness regressed from within

-It was suisin.

It was her lips that made me quit.

Heart Barbarians.

Fighting to defend,

But the end result is

-DESTROY.

Forever to decay

Always displayed on a stage,

And the act was never the issue.

So sublime; yet, it's a beautiful issue.

Claps and tissues

Roses and bows

Crucify and crown

My mind that dwells on your

Swollen hell

While,

My Goddess taps into my

Shell of a heart.

Shark Week,

You came to devour on

Me.

Please love me.

I'm weak.

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

Intriguing, dirty, dark, control, captivating all words that came to mind upon reading this. I like this very much.

The flow is effortless and your words are carefully woven, paints a number of images in minds canvas.
Congratulations on a stunning work.

Ngā mihi maioha (warmest regards)
Rach x

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so, and for spending the time to read as well as leaving me your thoughts, I highly appreciate that!

[augustus]

Thought provoking and well written.

[JessyJacob]

I like the title , Queen of Gotham", well then it points to her King, endhaa? Then he must be King of Gotham.

Nice writing to make fun.

[Stacy Purvis]

Interesting choice of words! Shark week...I may know a few sharks. Oddly enough, it's not the sharks one should be afraid of, it's the piranha. ; )
Excellent read!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you'd enjoyed it Anastasia. Indeed, evil takes shape in different forms...

[Stacy Purvis]

It does indeed, sir.

[annalysiar]

Dark. Tempting and controlling. I love how it just pulls you in

[Jesus & Gypsy Soul]

"My mind that dwells on your
Swollen hell" - YOW! Very rich poem. I don't believe I've ever read a flow of a poem like this before. It's striking. I enjoyed it.

[sinNsincerity]

Why thank you, it was my pleasure and I'm glad you had enjoyed it.
I do my best when it comes to studying words and phrases. I credit my teacher's who taught me and shared this knowledge of wizardry.

[Emily]

Loved it!!
Keep on writing!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Emily

[Dash the Reaper]

nicely done and the title is just on point too

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[Double T]

This is writing at its best. My main question is this: where did you get the title of "Queen of Gotham."?

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Double T. Idk, I just thought of it out of the blue...I was pretty stoned like always...

[Pink Pastel]

Nicely done great poem very romantic too

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Melissa.

[Pink Pastel]

Your welcome^-^

[Abioduun]

I enjoyed this, your choice of word so fluid and poetic.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so.