Fallen in Autumn

Sultry Mrs. Vixen;

My lustrous Vampiress Princess.

Lost sight of the lie,

Then exiled from

Your Eden heart.

Thine Oedipus eyes

Seduced the Exodus plight.

Never denying,

Providing the bottom line

Above your eyes.

No tears for my Icarus cries.

Magik and the Divine.

Your grace

Has summoned my mind

With your taste.

A drip of blood is all

That remained on your fangs.

Your pendulum waist

Unwinds my mental waste.

Desires and our fire contained

Within the rock portal;

Speaking with only cups and a string

-Aeneas and Dido

Unmortals

Unhonest

Untestimonious

My hell swells, swells, and swells;

Dwelling in your fornever

Ending wishing well

I upheld with dying stars.

Touch me too!

Author's Note

Voila

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

Ahhh....those autumn (or fall) stumbles....do they quite compare to the ones in summer?

Delightful read, as always.

The upside is, as one star dies, it's black hole is beginning of a new one, right? (I am a poet, if I say so, it is true....lol)

[sinNsincerity]

Summer can be quite cold.
It's all a Russian Doll.

[John the Baptist]

Interesting use of mythological themes in this one, also some clever puns (fornever). Basically, what we have here is the anguish of being dumped. If the last verse gives any indication, though, the parting is not attended by bitterness. Chalking it up to experience, I guess. Imaginative piece.

[Jas]

Astonishing! I love this and how passionate it feels

[Mari' Emeraude]

Sexy and seductive verse here, rich in dark and "spooky" imagery!

[sinNsincerity]

All of what makes me up, but there's still more to uncover . . . Thank you for reading Mari'.

[Mikku]

"Lost sight of the lie, then exiled from your Eden heart. " best lines... An awesome piece...

[sinNsincerity]

'Tis true . . .

[JessyJacob]

Nice good writing. Feeling blessed for the excuse, to Her was a depression, nicely came out from mirages in desert, and really you are at perennial rivers, that always flow with their sweet taste even in summer.

[Cherrie]

Dwelling in your fornever. Great line. Great word play in this, not labored but with a natural flow.

[sinNsincerity]

One of my fav. words. Good day Mrs. Palmer.

[Alecia]

eeeek!!!! so very, very good!

[sinNsincerity]

Always a pleasure Alecia.

[.]

Love the imagery and the passion created in this piece. Thanks for sharing

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Ms. Lamour.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

The power behind the attraction of two- hard to be avoided or unfelt- to give in or resist? What will win? Wonderful imaginary pictures planted🌹

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Kelly, Nd I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I give in easily. I resist not to . . .

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes I did slways a pleasure🌹

[¿]

Autumn, the desired time..........that breeze! And this poem is like gradually making that era. Great read and many thanks for sharing!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you liked it.