Coalesce

Your sorta like a bride

...

~a one night stand~

again and again

AND AGAIN!

i couldn't stand it

So

each time our bodies

Knocked over

Your

night stand

It was quicksand

So let's turn

Over the sand

And withstand

Life without the glass.

A honeymoon

That receded

Each time

Like the tide,

But

       No moon

Just moods

Of good use

Of sin;

Salute!

Not necessarily   at night

Necessarily whenever

We like.                  I like

You

Not like

Similes and metaphors,

But much

much

MORE!

Metamorphosis

Is our deliciousness

I just mended the unlikeness of

YOUR MIND

-with mine.

BLISS

Author's Note

I wrote this about how we (the readers) go from one read to another read 'till we get sucked into one that we can not resist, study, and finally, become one with it.

Reviews

[JayceeC]

Ha such a clever write David. Searching for a poem is like searching for the perfect lover. Sometimes we find one we connect with and sometimes it's just a quick mind f**k. Someday it seems like I wade through pages and pages of the darn things before even finding one worth comment. Even favorite authors feel stagnated.
Oh to find that one that perfectly speaks. Now if I could just write one again..lol
Jan

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Jan!
You know what I'm talking about ahaha
Well put, I agree very much so.

[DeerInHeadlights]

well I love the way you put this. because you did draw me into it, and when I read your note.. yes.. what a great depiction. I know I do that every time. I look for something good, fresh- not a cliché- and when I read it.. I love it and I comment.

good work my poet friend. I love the idea behind this.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm more than glad that you loved it and the way that it did!
It's such a pleasure to hear from you. Thank you!

[Sindu]

Hey David! That's one infective piece. I agree about being sucked into something great in an ununderstadble way. There are such highs and lows to this one. Felt like a mix of rhyme and rap, refreshingly.

[sinNsincerity]

hahaha yes! It's a beautiful madness and one that I enjoy!
Thank you so much for reading Sindu, I highly appreciate it!

[Ruth]

Damn...I love this! Powerful and a roller coaster to absorb, awesome :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Ruth, it such a pleasure knowing you enjoyed it!

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful love poem, Sin in Sincerity. Love the tide in it. :) rudi

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Rudi, I highly appreciate that.
A love poem about me and the material I read.
It was sort of a self reflection of myself that occurred in my subconscious, I guess...
On how most times, I could go from one read to an other and not be attracted to it 'till I find that one I obsess about.

[wordman]

love at random, when the mood strikes! night or day,beyond the tradition

[sinNsincerity]

Love at random yes, but not with a woman- rather you (the readers).

[wordman]

love your self and your emotions

[sinNsincerity]

I wanted to make the reader be one with me and I with them.

[wordman]

wouldn't it be great if we could make them feel what we feel,our true emotions

[sinNsincerity]

I think that would be beautiful. We would totally understand one another.

[KWP]

oh well there's a sweat filled number of moments cascading through each other loins ... nice pace ... nice unity ... enjoy !

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much.
I wrote this about how we (the readers) go from one read to another read 'till we get sucked into one that we can not resist, study, and finally, become one with it.

[KWP]

seduction within WC - oooh la la X

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words and you taught me a new word. I like the drive and the energy of this poem. Nice ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Really? That's so awesome, I'm really stoked about that!
Thank you so much Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Hope Rose]

Nice! That's all the words I have to say lol Keep it up my friend:)

~Small Town Hick

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading.

[Hope Rose]

You're welcome

[child of God]

This is a wonderful and loving work the tone deep and passionate the reader can tell you put all your heart and soul in the peice

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much!