Coalesce

Your sorta like a bride

...

~a one night stand~

again and again

AND AGAIN!

i couldn't stand it

So

each time our bodies

Knocked over

Your

night stand

It was quicksand

So let's turn

Over the sand

And withstand

Life without the glass.

A honeymoon

That receded

Each time

Like the tide,

But

       No moon

Just moods

Of good use

Of sin;

Salute!

Not necessarily   at night

Necessarily whenever

We like.                  I like

You

Not like

Similes and metaphors,

But much

much

MORE!

Metamorphosis

Is our deliciousness

I just mended the unlikeness of

YOUR MIND

-with mine.

BLISS

Author's Note

I wrote this about how we (the readers) go from one read to another read 'till we get sucked into one that we can not resist, study, and finally, become one with it.

Reviews

[JayceeC]

Ha such a clever write David. Searching for a poem is like searching for the perfect lover. Sometimes we find one we connect with and sometimes it's just a quick mind f**k. Someday it seems like I wade through pages and pages of the darn things before even finding one worth comment. Even favorite authors feel stagnated.
Oh to find that one that perfectly speaks. Now if I could just write one again..lol
Jan

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Jan!
You know what I'm talking about ahaha
Well put, I agree very much so.

[JessyJacob]

I just mended the unlikeness of
YOUR MIND
-with mine.

I like the above lines and your note.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

In the burning embers of the coals - the aftermath of the fire that burns deep and silent - without knowing of the heat unless you come closer to feel the warmth...🌹

[sinNsincerity]

Sounds like a place I want to be right now.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes wouldn’t that be the perfect place🌹

[sinNsincerity]

Very much so ma'am.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Smiling - love it the way you played with words here- -‘is our deliciousness’- love it - deliciously decadent 🌹

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad I could bring a smile to you Kelly. I love that!

[Matching Socks]

Very cool, love the author note!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Ana, I highly appreciate that and I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

[Insight "MH"]

You surely pictured that experience in a unique way.

This ending is magnificent:

I just mended the unlikeness of
YOUR MIND
-with mine.

[sinNsincerity]

hehe Thank you so much Insight, I haighly appreciate that so much!

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome ^_^

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

I love the way you turned the words against themselves and cleverly making the readers mind running to catch up with you! Loved it

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Crystal, I'm so glad that you did!

[E G TEN]

Casanova like writing at its finest here bro, you still can juggle words
and mesmerized at the same time. Haven't lost your touches one bit
Always fresh, very cool. Thanks EG

[sinNsincerity]

Hehe Thank you Sir, I really appreciate that!

[Ana B.]

oh this is my new favorite of your Sin :) loooove it :D

[sinNsincerity]

It is such a pleasure Ana, I am so glad that you had enjoyed it. Thank you so much!

[Tag_YoureDead]

this is really true, honestly. Great job :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Tag_YoureDead]

Welcome, mate

[Isabel]

This piece kind of takes you all over the place, such an interesting concept!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for spending the time to read it Maria, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it!