Quite Acquainted

Make me feel so good...

No favors

Por favor-

It's all about the love ain't it

Visions of you naked

While I guzzle on the

Minds of the ancients

Don't contemplate

Just be great

Full

But I'm so full

And fed up with all your bull

Sipping on God’s blessings

But the devil has me

In a drunken stupor

When I dive into

Hot springs

Then I spring out

No clouds

Just clear tears veered

When you nearly gazed

Right through these red eyes

Did you fear when you revered

The silk and shear?

Attain it

Don't blame him

Blame me!

Tag,

(YOUR IT)

Reviews

[B]

Sometimes i feel that the devil thing
Most people just act wrong then blame it on the devil
Truth is
We are in so much control
That the devil is ever so small
I love this write
Sometimes a woman can be so bad inside
She can take you places you should never go
Devil or none devil
Its your choice

[sinNsincerity]

I don't blame him, more so embrace pieces of him and I feel that it's necessary.
Everything in existence has polarity. The pendulum swings back and forth, so to be good and evil is a must for me... I must loose myself to find myself and that's a cycle that'll only help me rise up and grow. The issue is not getting trapped.
I believe the devil is just as big as God and I would be a fool to think not.
Thank you so much for your insight Nisreen. It's more than what others give.
I always appreciate it!

[T. R. Ash]

I thought that your argument here is "Embrace pieces of the devil". because whatever it is that you believe in- the devil, bad luck- we have all have pieces of these. Along with 'god' and 'good luck'

[sinNsincerity]

we do carry both and there's no denying it, at least for me, to grow and be a better person...

[Charlotte e.e. Griffiths]

All of your work is very passionate and meaningful! It almost feels like it could be a rap - please do not take offense to that, but it pertains very closely to that style and I could imagine you could take your writing a lot further in that regard if you wished!

[B]

i guess my religious beliefs are personal
but i do not embrace the devil no .......

[Bear]

Sobriety is a state of mind as is love, drunk on love but suffering a hangover from it's conditions. (While I guzzle on the Minds of the ancients) Great line, I would like to drink some of that nectar, now if you can tell me the best year and vintage plus where I can get some :~)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you bear; although, this wasn't about sobriety, but I'm not trying to knock you down for that.
It means more to me to hear what it means to others, such as yourself, rather than what I inteded it to be. That's pretty awesome!

[B. Boileau]

The devils in the doing. I like the fast pace and the abrupt ending.
BTW what do the minds of the ancients taste like ?
(sorry the devil made me do it!)
SUPERBLY penned my friend !

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much.
They taste great hehe
always appreciate when people leave me their thoughts, so i'm forever grateful!

[Zugzwang]

A playful tone here but it appears to be raising some serious issues. I found it very interesting.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you did find it interesting.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Sin you have some interesting lines but the hurried pace seem to detract from the essence of your words.

Regards,
Al

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Alfred

[Stan Lee]

Did you mean stupor ?
Interesting thoughts...

[sinNsincerity]

yep
thanks for reading

[Archana]

A wonderful piece .......... thanks for the read request

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!