Make a Wish

I have a fountain of quarters

In my heart from

All the times I've played love.

Each time the screen read

GAME OVER!

Forever hung over

Forever I hunger

Forever I plunder

Into the depths

Of the fountain

To be left alone with

Infinite wonder...

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Reviews

[Tashida]

Man for real you need to copyright these analogies or better yet let me steal some cuz they are seriously sooo creative. I really love your style of writing: the way you say stuff without flat out saying it. It makes for a more colorful piece.
That aside, if this is based off of real experiences, I hope you find a girl soon ;) You deserve it :)

[sinNsincerity]

This website does copyright my poems for me and I have had some of my poems in print by some publishers. And I have actually had some people on here demand that I sell them some of of my poems so they can can claim it as their own, but the never want to pay up.
I'm glad you love my style. I do try my best to make it my own and to stand out from anyone.
And thank you, I pray so as well, but at the moment I'm not looking for a women because I'm so caught up in getting my degree, but if it happens it will happen.

[Tashida]

Yea I get that... And it WILL happen (i got a feeling lol):)

[WriterGirl101]

Very nice poem. I really enjoyed it..

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, I'm so glad that you did!

[Stan Lee]

Life's a gamble but you gotta be in it to win it! :) Great concept. Thanks for sharing.

[silent poet]

Simple and well written.. lovely

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you.

[Writeforlovely]

Oooooh, that is good :) i love the idea.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so hon!

[Harley Sapphire]

I love how this balances rhyme, beat and depth. At first I thought it would be that whole "if I had a quarter for every time...." but I was pleasantly surprised. Poetry writing this well is a talent I can only hope to one day achieve.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Harley!
Hehe, I try to stay away from cheche's, so I'm glad you'd enjoyed it.
read moreThank you Harley!
Hehe, I try to stay away from cheche's, so I'm glad you'd enjoyed it.
As long as you speak from your heart, you will achieve it hon.
Thank you once again.

[MandaBear]

Quite an amazing piece. You really know how to capture a feeling. Great job!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so!

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

Sin, I am such a fan of your work. I love the way you own your words, each one takes on the meaning you need and envision them to mean. Really wonderful work. this one really shows your personality as a writer and your imagination. Everything i see your name in my read que i am excited because i know its gonna be something new

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Crystal, I'm truly honored!
This made my day. =D

[Emily]

Love the first part!
Keep it up!!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you.

[TheOne&Only]

I thought this was a very cute write! Thank you for sharing. So simple yet so sweet.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you think so hon.
Thank you Ms. One and Only.

[wordman]

wow ! you could start your own video game,get rich and famous .

[sinNsincerity]

I wish hahah
You're too kind Sir. Thank you!