Wishful Truth

She's the sweet sticky honey

That resides in the confines of my bee hive mind.

Oh my my my...

The residue...

My Mrs. Pooh

You roar when I don't give you a taste

of what I'm thinking...

The sum of a wishful truth.

Reviews

[Meraki]

I really like this. I understand it. I can relate to it, mainly because I do it myself. It's great. Nice work. I'm sorry it took me so long to review it. I tried reading your other requests but they were a bit to sexual for my tastes. Again, great work. Thank you for sharing this with me.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Meraki for reading, and I'm glad that you do understand it.

[Sultrysoul]

I like this it is that youthful passion that we all once felt and that each relationship starts with. this is great imagery, subtle but just right.

[sinNsincerity]

That which it begins with and what I strive to always keep alive.
Thank you so much hon!

[Sultrysoul]

You are most welcome

[KWP]

ooooh gimme a spoon and I will scoop out your mind and have it drip, drop, drap into blender and I will add yoghurt, banana, perhaps some strawberries - hit the whip - drink it up and we shall have a convergrence of your mighty mind with mine .... hehehehe ...

i like this - it kinda bounces and makes one smile with the loving simplicity XX

[sinNsincerity]

Sounds like a mighty tasty smoothie!
I'm glad it could make you smile for a moment in time.read moreSounds like a mighty tasty smoothie!
I'm glad it could make you smile for a moment in time.
That makes it all worth it!

[Gee]

Very creative,hope the donkey doesn't get jealous !!!!

[sinNsincerity]

I am the donkey! hehe

[Terry O'Leary]

Hope ya don't get stung... ;-))

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for your consideration Terry!

[....................]

Love this, SiS...the opening lines are fantastic and this breathes such creativity... this is very relatable...

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much FT, I always try to put my own twist on things. =D

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Very sweet sentiment:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you bro!
I just had my final's today man and they went well.
Always blessed!

[TheOne&Only]

Oh, I like this piece!! :) The woman sounds like a curious cat, & the man doesn't seem to mind the feisty side to her feline self...LOL....( her need to know, intrigues him in such a way) ...

..at least thats what I pictured in this write...LOL..sorry dont mind me and my wild imagination...

[sinNsincerity]

Don't ever be sorry for speaking you mind, especially when you're insight was nearly spot on. I love hearing your imagination. It's beautiful and I dearly respect it!

[TheOne&Only]

Awe thank you Sin. Your kind words mean a ton to me to hear. I have all the love and respect for you as well my dear!!

[sinNsincerity]

That is such a pleasure to hear and I hold that dearly to my heart!

[Stan Lee]

I have no qualifications to be commenting on your poems S.I.S...
I'm just giggling at the hilarious gif! :)
Oh my my my! :D

[sinNsincerity]

I know right! That bear loves his honey haha

[Emily]

Vary well writing!
Keep it up!!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Emily!

[AaronFreitas]

Love the creativity buddy... good work!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Aaron!