Wishful Truth

She's the sweet sticky honey

That resides in the confines of my bee hive mind.

Oh my my my...

The residue...

My Mrs. Pooh

You roar when I don't give you a taste

of what I'm thinking...

The sum of a wishful truth.

Reviews

[Meraki]

I really like this. I understand it. I can relate to it, mainly because I do it myself. It's great. Nice work. I'm sorry it took me so long to review it. I tried reading your other requests but they were a bit to sexual for my tastes. Again, great work. Thank you for sharing this with me.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Meraki for reading, and I'm glad that you do understand it.

[Asante]

This made me grin at, like, 5:10 in the morning. Loved the little taste of nostalgia in it with the Pooh line.
If only she knew how you felt then!
An entertaining, very fine read, bro.

[sinNsincerity]

That's pretty awesome! Thank you man.

[Writeforlovely]

Oh i love it! It was short. Made me laugh and smile. Very clever!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, I'm very glad that you had enjoyed it. 'Twas my pleasure!

[Devious13]

ms pooh?? your personal thing or just came to mind that is a very interesting piece intrigued aND would love a lil detail n insight for the motivation to this piece thanks

[sinNsincerity]

She's my alien girl, my phantom, and my Goddess. The ON3 that I worship... The one I'm trying to get to.

[Devious13]

have you met her ?? very unique choice of name pooh ... still in ??? let me ask you ....why have you not met with her yet?

[sinNsincerity]

Because we live in different spaces

[steven sundell]

Ur brutal truth, shines through and separates your own style in this piece. The standard form or structure of so many others who might be a slave to fear and by extension fall into the trappings that lay before them by following a form or pattern, instead of the inspiration that gave birth to one's true idea. Stay real, and good, bad, or otherwise, it will always , at the very least, be an honest reflection of the inspiration that made you put pen to paper, in the first place, to truly, create! Well done my friend .

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Steven. I always try to put my own style on my poems and stray away from the traditional way of writing it. I don't believe that there's any wrong way of writing poetry. As for me, I just write for myself, so it'll always be real.
I really appreciate your review bro.

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

She's the sweet sticky honey
That resides in the confines of my bee hive mind.

This is awesome and so sweet and playful. Great Job

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Crystal.

[Ohhhwillow]

This is so fab! So sticky sweet in its snappy rhythm, and supple tone. Very lovable piece! Thank you

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading!

[Shae]

Hmmm very thought provoking haha. Passionate. Nice :-)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Shae! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

[Girl With A Pen]

I have to admit, I read this twice and every time I would giggle when I read "The residue...
My Mrs. Pooh" This poem made me smile and warms my heart. Definitely my favorite

[sinNsincerity]

And that makes it all worth it!
Thank you so much for reading hon. =D

[Death's Poet]

Wow this is incredible. It's deep and thought provoking with just a touch of playfulness during the Mrs. Pooh line. I love this

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

[Dark Poet]

An innocent and sweet poem. Simple with such a beautoful way of expressing admiration

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for rhinking so as well as reading hon. =]