The Ms. who Missed Mr. Mystery

You're a beautiful butterfly

While,

I'm everything but free.

Please!

Ms...?

I love you like a second.

Miss-Stress.

No mistrust.

Do you believe in us?

I'm so stressed,

But all that can all go away

In a second.

Do you have one?

Because I have an abundance for you.

No interview.

It's quite interesting,

Rather yet,

Intriguing.

More like a mystery...

Mr.-ry..?

No need for history

'Cause we have great chemistry.

I'm an alchemist when it comes

To the development of poetry.

Turning nothing into something.

So watch your step 

When you travel across my step-less chest.

Dive in.

Please chime in

Before I have to

Die

&

Resurrect

Again...

Amen!

Reviews

[J. K. Hannah]

Your word play and twisting ideas reminds me of another author.. and it isn't coming to me who! It's so unhelpful to say, but I have an image in my head of a story s/he wrote but can't recall the full story or the author... I hope of think of them so I can let you know.

Anyway, it's a really interesting and fresh style. Fun to read but not playful- serious without being serious.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm not to sure of the writer you speak of, but now I'm curious...
I don't like to read too much which is ironic, but I just try to bring something new based on my life experiences...

[J. K. Hannah]

That is ironic! I will try to remember who it is...

[Chopstix]

"I don't like to read too much."

Does that mean you don't read much.

Counterproductive.

How can you bring something new if you don't know what others brought?

BTW "Mr. -ry" alternative "Mr. Rhee"

[sinNsincerity]

The poetry would speak otherwise and for itself.

[MOON]

Lovely play on words , clever write.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so as well as d=for spending the time to read!

[StimulateyourCreativity]

Awesome,
"No need for history, cause we have great chemistry"
The first thought I had when I met her ha, nice work!!

[sinNsincerity]

Leave the bullshit in the past right and build something great!

[sunprincess]

...........a most incredible write...and true chemistry is needed ★

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading, I highly appreciate it!

[jeannemarie coulter]

reminds me a bit of the song "makin' love out of nothing at all" thua your words are in fine company...thank you...

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for that Jeannemarie!

[Terry O'Leary]

Interesting and very clever...
Unfortunately, you haven't met Miss L... she'd have blown your mind...

[sinNsincerity]

Hehe touce'
Thank you for reading Terry!

[Shweta Shah]

Wow!
Truly an alchemist!
Loved the way you played with words and sounds.
The doubtful and mysterious tone in the beginning;the questions you asked helps us get the character description, and the great idea of love....All sum up to a great poem!
Thanks for sharing.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading Shweta, I highly appreciate you spending the time to read it!
I'm really glad you loved it.

[Shweta Shah]

Welcome! :D

[Emily]

Great poem!
Well done!
Keep it up!!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Emily!

[E G TEN]

Well said Sin, awesome word play and the story is intact
and flows well, Thanks.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you my friend. It's my honor and I appreciate it!

[Sultrysoul]

Nice piece ........... :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Ms. Sultry!

[Sultrysoul]

Always my pleasure :)