The Ms. who Missed Mr. Mystery

You're a beautiful butterfly

While,

I'm everything but free.

Please!

Ms...?

I love you like a second.

Miss-Stress.

No mistrust.

Do you believe in us?

I'm so stressed,

But all that can all go away

In a second.

Do you have one?

Because I have an abundance for you.

No interview.

It's quite interesting,

Rather yet,

Intriguing.

More like a mystery...

Mr.-ry..?

No need for history

'Cause we have great chemistry.

I'm an alchemist when it comes

To the development of poetry.

Turning nothing into something.

So watch your step 

When you travel across my step-less chest.

Dive in.

Please chime in

Before I have to

Die

&

Resurrect

Again...

Amen!

Reviews

[J. K. Hannah]

Your word play and twisting ideas reminds me of another author.. and it isn't coming to me who! It's so unhelpful to say, but I have an image in my head of a story s/he wrote but can't recall the full story or the author... I hope of think of them so I can let you know.

Anyway, it's a really interesting and fresh style. Fun to read but not playful- serious without being serious.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm not to sure of the writer you speak of, but now I'm curious...
I don't like to read too much which is ironic, but I just try to bring something new based on my life experiences...

[J. K. Hannah]

That is ironic! I will try to remember who it is...

[Chopstix]

"I don't like to read too much."

Does that mean you don't read much.

Counterproductive.

How can you bring something new if you don't know what others brought?

BTW "Mr. -ry" alternative "Mr. Rhee"

[sinNsincerity]

The poetry would speak otherwise and for itself.

[Sara Mercury]

Yes, reminds me of playing with words when I write a song. I just go with the flow, and it turns out something rather like this ... outrageous! And nobody is more outrageous than me ... and, of course ... you. :) Keep on writing!

[Tiffany K Charles]

I couldn't help but wonder how long you have been writing when you worte this? It's seems like you were at the beggining stages but overall not too bad.

[NicolinaJade]

I really love your style of writing, it's fun and different to read.

[Dianne S Penfold]

I like this. This broken "rhythm" of the lines. It doesn't need to match up because the lack of a solid structure works well. It sounds like asymmetry looks if you know what I mean. Very well written.

[SunnyDaze]

This is gorgeous writing. Gave me chills and awakened my heart from a deep sleep. I felt like this was written personally for me by a lover. Well done

[John the Baptist]

Comes across like a series of puns, but also sounds like a seduction in progress. Let's hope the recipient is paying close attention.

[Minnie]

The words are winding, very creative! It is a wonderful way to write

[Luci]

your words feel like lyrics, the way they flow so easily. a pleasure to read

[Kaede16]

Refreshing style. Short sentences and play with words can really have an interesting effect on the reader. Keep it up! Hope to see more like this one :)

[VelvetPotato]

Clever and whimsical piece. I love your word play and flow! A fun read.