Supermarket Heart

Repeat

Reheat

Re-glance…

No pots or pans…

Just the vision of us

holding hands.

No shirts or pants…

Just that smile that’ll

forever relapse like

the Asian-American

sun dance.

It came with no receipt

and there was most certainly

no needs for a plastic

or paper bag...

Because we came to eat!

Reviews

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

There are some really strong lines in here i am particularly in love with the

It came with no receipt
and there was most certainly
no needs for a plastic
or paper bag...

To me that shows the limitedsness of the this relationship to be served once. Great piece, the lines of this is the part that stick out the most to me, almost an illusion, like its true meaning is just peeking out. Very nice solid work.

[sinNsincerity]

I can't give it all away...that's for face to face convo's hehe =D

[Terry O'Leary]

Scrumptious write... provides a lot todigest...

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Terry!

[Jamestown]

Song lyrics?
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Na, not a song lyric. That's not my field of preference lol
I wrote it in a single piece, but when I decided to post it her, I chopped it up a tad bit...

[Andrew Ballard]

Wow... I don't even know how to analyze this. It's just... wow.

It has so many deep elements, hidden in the simplicity of the words. I cannot even try to fathom what you wanted to say, because there are so many things that could be true.

Good job. Good job indeed.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Andrew, I'll let you think about it for a while. =D

[wordman]

david you are creative,i am jealous

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you my friend. That means the world to me.
I'm just scratching the surface. Wait till I go beneath it...