Supermarket Heart

Repeat

Reheat

Re-glance…

No pots or pans…

Just the vision of us

holding hands.

No shirts or pants…

Just that smile that’ll

forever relapse like

the Asian-American

sun dance.

It came with no receipt

and there was most certainly

no needs for a plastic

or paper bag...

Because we came to eat!

Reviews

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

There are some really strong lines in here i am particularly in love with the

It came with no receipt
and there was most certainly
no needs for a plastic
or paper bag...

To me that shows the limitedsness of the this relationship to be served once. Great piece, the lines of this is the part that stick out the most to me, almost an illusion, like its true meaning is just peeking out. Very nice solid work.

[sinNsincerity]

I can't give it all away...that's for face to face convo's hehe =D

[Pushkar Prabhat]

chef's special.......?
platinum card.....
mouthwatering read.....
i loved it!!!
:)

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you loved it. Thank you!

[Saddam]

It came with no receipt

Funny side too.
I enjoy it.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you'd enjoyed it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Sound like a fun place.
"No shirts or pants"
Don't have these stores in Michigan. A entertaining poem. Create good vision and I like the positive energy of the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

That store only exist in my mind, but I'm glad a piece of my world can visit you in Michigan!

[Coyote Poetry]

It did and I enjoyed the trip.

[Sultrysoul]

I love the subtle symbolism ... great piece

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Ms. Sultry!

[Sultrysoul]

My pleasure you are talented thank you for sharing

[Terry Richardson]

very good poem liked it a lot

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you did, thank you so much for spending the time to read Terry!

[marcus]

interesting....I like it!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Marcus, I'm glad you did!

[....................]

Love the title and playfulness in your words... so clever and light-hearted...I love poetry like this because it lets me grab a cart and fill it with all kinds of personal treats...

[sinNsincerity]

A shopping cart? hehe =D
That's just amazing, I highly appreciate your thought and kind words as well.
Thank you!

[JayceeC]

This has such a fun, sexy tone to it. Left me smiling at the playful antics, but who said it always has to be serious...

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad it made you smile Jan. And even if people say it has to be serious...what makes them right?

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

nice work..!
Liked the way you framed it..
Enjoyable!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Jyoti!

[EileenM]

Quite charming and playful! There's a lot of fun going on here, words and other-words. Very well done, David!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Eileen!