Supermarket Heart

Repeat

Reheat

Re-glance…

No pots or pans…

Just the vision of us

holding hands.

No shirts or pants…

Just that smile that’ll

forever relapse like

the Asian-American

sun dance.

It came with no receipt

and there was most certainly

no needs for a plastic

or paper bag...

Because we came to eat!

Reviews

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

There are some really strong lines in here i am particularly in love with the

It came with no receipt
and there was most certainly
no needs for a plastic
or paper bag...

To me that shows the limitedsness of the this relationship to be served once. Great piece, the lines of this is the part that stick out the most to me, almost an illusion, like its true meaning is just peeking out. Very nice solid work.

[sinNsincerity]

I can't give it all away...that's for face to face convo's hehe =D

[augustus]

Who needs food when both naked!

[sinNsincerity]

Num nom. . .

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

And a delicious eat and treat there you did meet I’m sure of It - sounds delicious to me - great write enjoyed every word🌹

[sinNsincerity]

Very much so. Thank you for reading, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure🌹

[Tabby Mac]

Most interesting write! Very clever you! The last line gave me insight as to why I always get hit on in grocery stores! LOL I think I know why those guys are only carrying a basket of random things! Haha
I found my mind shooting in many different directions with this piece! Well done!
Tabby

[sinNsincerity]

hahaha I used to work at a food 4 less and so many beautiful women would walk in. May I take your bags to your car ma'am?

[Tabby Mac]

Hahahahaha
And I always thought they all just really had good customer service!

[sinNsincerity]

No, I helped everyone really hehe

[Cat]

Beautiful poetry. Love your rhyming scheme absolutely lovely :)

[mercy party]

I enjoyed this, I like your signature ability to present real life. Very cool poem again man!

[Hebe]

Very different way of looking at a relationship... quite imaginative and playful.. nice write!

[Valentine]

A different type of a write, guess nakedness at the table is legal. Valentine

[Tashida]

Aren't you quite the smitten one? I loved the metaphor behind this one... Suuuper creative! I love how you find metaphors I never would have thought of. It shows you think outside the box.
splendid work David :)

[Giulia King]

Lol, this poem has a funny flow! I love how you're twisting the words

[boygene borice]

I love the wya you twist words. I ha to reread again to get the true meaning of the poem. :)