Mother Moon

Mother Moon

All those bright nights,

alone, 

I gazed up at the moon and 

I knew I was gazing at you.

But the thing is that I didn't know until I met you.

My heart was blue because it was broken into two more than two times.

Two square is four and you bring joy into my life like the days when I used to play four square.

“I was within and without.”

The watcher I am, but that was the past because I was...

I am because the moon arrived and I won't lie about how it had broken me down into a cry.

Why?

Not because you are mine, but because we are a “we” and that makes me.

Honestly love, I'm not perfect.

I may not be a heart surgeon for when the heart is hurting.

Though I will always be there during the darkest moments when you don't want the sun light to peek through the curtains.

I love you because when you read my writing you think they're amazing when they're only the thoughts that drive me crazy!

I see that we're a new chapter in our life,

so I pray to God that we'll never run out of pages.

 

Reviews

[TheOne&Only]

Its an emotional night for me, & this line...

"I may not be a heart surgeon for when the heart is hurting.
Though I will always be there during the darkest moments when you don't want the sun light to peek through the curtains."

Made the tears come, Love how your writing sometimes speak to me, especially when I need to hear it. Despite its from you, its still good to spontaneously read something you NEED/WANT to hear. Do you know what I mean. Thank you. I needed to cry.

[sinNsincerity]

I know the felling hon and don't worry. I'm a man, but hey, tears are nothing to be ashamed about. Tears cleanse the soul sometimes...not always. sucks, but I'm the type that lets a lot of s**t pass right on by 'till I hit a breaking point every so often. It's rare, bit it happens.
To me, those lines are very sincere and hold so much value to me because it's a sense of security even thought nothing can really be done, but it says, "hey, I'm still here for you."
It means the world to me that I could speak and connect to you. That makes it all worth it to me.
Just know your not alone and your great. Just keep writing about it and it'll help you get though the pain.

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Beautiful love poem, Sin in Sincerity. Well done. :) Rudi

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Rudi!

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and good thoughts in the words.
"I love you because when you read my writing you think they're amazing when they're only the thoughts that drive me crazy!
I see that we're a new chapter in our life,
so I pray to God that we'll never run out of pages."
We need people who appreciate us and will stand with us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Sir!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I enjoyed the poetry.

[wordman]

what is it about the sky and love,they seem to go hand in hand

[sinNsincerity]

With me it's not necessarily the sky, but rather the moon has always owned me.

[J Todd Underhill]

Great piece liked the imagery and sentiment! Some love poems need to be written until time quits ticking.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Todd, I always try to put my twist on thangs...

[Jamestown]

Another fantastic piece of work my friend!
Very creative and also touching:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed

[sinNsincerity]

i like to touch haha
Thank you James, your's the best!