All the Time

You know what

I hate about you?

Nothing!

Reviews

[Rana]

For a second, until my eyes could fall on the last line, I was wondering what was wrong and why the lines won't appear and then scrolled down to find the yellow answer and smile and sigh all at the same time. This was cruel, witty and cute xD loved it! Totally.

[sinNsincerity]

I love hearing everyone's reaction when they read it!
I thought it would be more interesting to write it this way rather than just saying I love everything about you...

[Emily]

Haha! Great poem!
Well done!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Emily!

[Terry O'Leary]

Hate is its own retribution...
Nice

[sinNsincerity]

I love to write using an antithesis.
Thank you for spending the time to read Terry.

[marcus]

Isn't it infuriating when you can find nothing to hate about a person!

[sinNsincerity]

too funny!

[Sultrysoul]

Lol love it simple and edge of seat

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you loved it!

[Sultrysoul]

............ :)

[JayceeC]

This is so suspenseful, especially reading from my phone where the page is a bit short so the last word waS a surprise. Its nice and sweet though. Lots to like in someone who doesn't seem to mind your flaw. B-)

[sinNsincerity]

Oh lord, how I would love to hear what everyone thinks before they read that final line. hehe
Thank you for reading Jan.

[JayceeC]

I thought it was a personal message at first. Not to me, but to someone who has made you angry.

[Sara]

I must admit, it left me speechless

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sara. Did it really?

[Sara]

It did. I must have scrolled up and down at least 10 times

[sinNsincerity]

hehe that's so awesome! =D

[Jamestown]

Simply fabulous!
This is the Sin I know and love, Bravo my dear friend:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you James!

[....................]

Way to go and make my heart stop!!!!!! Phew, I was ready to cry!!! I like this...it's simple but it creates suspense, makes the reader think about why someone would hate (you can hear the thoughts shuffling through the minds of the readers) and then you hit them with the answer and there is relief... so much said in that final word... I like it!

[sinNsincerity]

That's exactly what I wanted to happen. =D
Rather than say I love everything about someone, I thought it would be more interesting to say it this way. I'm really glad you liked it. Thank you!

[Luna Zerimar]

Well, well. That's good to hear.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Jessica.

[wordman]

i`m sure she does know that

[sinNsincerity]

So am I. Thank you Sir.