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She Was On The Earth Side 

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I Was On The Water Side, 

Together We Made Mud…

Reviews

[Andrew Ballard]

Hmm... So few words, yet so deep. But only if one takes the time to think about it.

Water + Earth = Mud
A simple concept, one most children would know. However, what are the implications of this simple concept?

The biggest thing that comes to mind, is the mud house. Which may still be used today (I don't know.) Either way, one of the first types of shelter. Which, as I go deeper, brings me to something else...

Because of the implication of a romantic relationship, I can see a metaphor, one of the shelter and security a pair of loving parents (Earth + Water) to a child (Mud) Similar to the security and shelter of a mud house.

Of course, I could be overthinking and overanalyzing, as I am apt to do. But it is fun to attempt to dig deep into the words, and find the true meaning. Which can be done with few given words, as I have just done.

I am only able to do this because there is a good amount of hidden meanings int= the few words given. So I applaud you. You are quite the wordsmith.

[sinNsincerity]

I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence of us through our horoscope signs.
She's a Virgo (Earth), I'm a Cancer (Water).
Together we make mud... hehe
I loved that you actually spent the time to think about it Andrew and I also enjoyed where your mind took it. I really appreciate it.
I am the same when it comes to overthinking things.
Of course I have my meaning to it, but it most certainly means more to me that you put a/ your own meaning to it. That's all I can ask from poetry...
Thank you and that is sincere!

[Andrew Ballard]

You're welcome. I enjoy allowing my mind to take me where it wants to go. It is enjoyable, and sometimes even helps me in my own writing.

If you don't mind me asking, is this about a true relationship you are in?

[sinNsincerity]

It was true, we no longer date, but everything I write is or has been true at a point...at least from my perspective. There are only about three poems that are imaginary or fantasy on her.

[Andrew Ballard]

That is a very interesting and nice way to find inspiration for writing. Especially poetry. Commendations from me to you.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for that.
I usually write about things after they pass and I gave them some thought...

[Sultrysoul]

And there is nothing like the feeling of mud. It seeps into the body with a refreshing affect. It's calming it's healing it's good for the soul. Earth and water both meant for each other. Great once again

[sinNsincerity]

It's most certainly meant to be as one.
I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence of us through our horoscope signs.
She's a Virgo (Earth), I'm a Cancer (Water).
Together we make mud... hehe

[Sultrysoul]

Great minds...lol

[JayceeC]

Ha! So you don't enjoy mud wrestling? This is a great way of saying you don't match. However, muddin' can be fun for a bit, as long as you don't get stuck in the mud.

[sinNsincerity]

I have never mud wrestled haha I wish!
You can look at it in such a way of not being compatible with each other, but I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence of us through our horoscope signs.
She's a Virgo (Earth), I'm a Cancer (Water).
Together we make mud... hehe

[Bear]

Sounds like true love to me, great concept thanks for sharing.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Bear, I really appreciate it!

[Emily]

I love how you described this, without just coming out and saying it in a boring way.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for acknowledging that and spending the time to read it Emily.
I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

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mud cools; mud cleanses; mud builds homes... the two were born to mix and become something different...love this!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you and I'm glad you did.
I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence of us through our horoscope sighs.
She's a Virgo (Earth), I'm a Cancer (Water).
Together we make mud...
And most certainly creating something more!

[Jamestown]

Very creative and humorous to say the least,
keep up the good work!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thanks for reading bro.
I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence of us through our horoscope sighs.
She's a Virgo (Earth), I'm a Cancer (Water).
Together we make mud...

[sereenaoutloud]

Oh this is a cute write... for some reason it took me back to my childhood and making mud pies.. lol
Great write as always Bestie!!

[sinNsincerity]

I wrote this symbolizing the unity and convergence of us through our horoscope sighs.
She's a Virgo (Earth), I'm a Cancer (Water).
Together we make mud...
Hehe that's funny, I can image you doing that. =D

[sereenaoutloud]

So much better reason than my mud pie making lol
That is very beautiful and so romantic Sweet Sin!! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Yours is just as good Sereena and you believe that!

[sereenaoutloud]

Oh my mud pies were legendary... i even added sprinkles of twigs!! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Did they taste good? hehe =D

[sereenaoutloud]

you will need to ask my mum lol

[sinNsincerity]

haha too funny! that made me smile hard!

[sereenaoutloud]

LOL....you make me laugh too...Bestie!! :)

[sinNsincerity]

That's amazing!!!

[Emily]

I LOVE it!
It's so cutie!!
Keep it up!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you did. thank you

[Archia]

So short and so simple yet it comes across with a much deeper, more powerful meaning. I loved the contrast of the two sides and what they create when they come together.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!