Morning Delight

I woke up with

your foot by the

side of my left ear

like a telephone.

Caressing my nose

and fiddling with

your right ankle bracelet

like a kitten toying

with a ball of yarn

as the gamma rays

splashed on our bodies.

Receding the dreams

as my heart gained three

centuries and my soul

consumed six in a

single evening.

It’s a shame to not

know this feeling...

Reviews

[annalysiar]

Touching, brief ans deep. Great write. I love the emotion you put into this

[jeannemarie coulter]

yes it is a shame...and even a greater shame to not feel worthy of it...love is simple and very real and ages us exponentially...

[sinNsincerity]

Everyone is worthy and that is a shame to feel so.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Aww what a sad ending! But very playful beginning. Not to worry my friend, it's coming, you'll have a girl who will have a foot up your nostrils someday!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Nadia!

[Cali]

The emotion in your poems is astounding...you may not know me, I'm new here! Haha but thanks for the add, it means a lot :) Your poems are so good!

[sinNsincerity]

It also means so much to me Cali. I really appreciate it!

[Cali]

Anytime! I can relate to your poems...I'm trying to find my voice through poetry. You seem to have it down pat :)

[sinNsincerity]

I'm more that glad that you can relate.
You will, the way I see it, how much are you willing to let the world look into you eyes, mind, and heart.
I'm getting there. It's not where I want it to be, but I'm enjoying the journey.
There's a lot of growth in my writing and within myself since I began writing...

[fattycbreezy52]

Wow and it's a lovely morning.This is what I would call .....Yes,love!

[sinNsincerity]

Most deff!
Thank you hon!

[Tiffany Thomas]

Wonderfully written! I loved how easy it was to envision a couple waking up to one another when reading it.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Tiffany!
I was have a conversation with someone and I had drifted into this day dream, so I had to write it down. =D

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it is a great feeling....the morning after...after....

nice feel to this.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

welcome.....

would love a visit from you some time....

j.

[marcus]

Different, I liked it!!!!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you did. Thank you!

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

The picture this paints is so comfortable and calming. Two lovers waking up to each other. I can tell you there is no better feeling than looking over in the morning and seeing the one for you smiling back. Great poem and thanks for making me smile

[sinNsincerity]

That makes me smile.
Thank you Crystal, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[AaronFreitas]

Nice words my friend :) It is a shame to not know that feeling

[sinNsincerity]

Thank Aaron! It really is...