A Tossed Love Potion

A Tossed Love Potion

A Poem by sinNsincerity

I remember the pain

of that day;

so today,

I’ll capture that

piece of my heart

and place it in

a glass jar.

Bonjour!


Plus comme bon voyage...


Here on the shore,

I toss the memories

into the sea,

so that they’ll

never be

dealt, felt, or smelt

ever again…

Just one with

the wicked ocean.



© 2015 sinNsincerity


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I didn't know you know French!!! Ah, you and I are alike in this, I usually gather memories in boxes and gently set them free into the sea (literally!). Though probably all in my head, I feel a heavy weight lift off my shoulders. A new beginning commences. Adieu et bon voyage indeed to yesterdays!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Just a tad bit here and there.
That is so awesome! I have only done that once, but there are .. read more
Bukky.O

7 Years Ago

amazing!!!



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oh how we wish it was that easy, to be able to shove it all in glass jar, all the heartache, pain negativity and seal it away!
Awesome imagery you create with this write Bestie....love it! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you Bestie!
~I would imagine people with addictions would love to do the same thing. This is very creative.~

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I would second that.
Thank you for reading!
I love the image of him tossing the heartbreak into the ocean. Great poem. I would have liked to hear more about the specifics of the pain and anguish--what they felt like. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
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If only some memories could be disposed of in this way I would undoubtedly run out of jars. A very visceral and original concept, with imagery that had me standing on the shore next to you. VERY well done! take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you Dan, I really appreciate that.
To me, the poems are the jars...
Well penned brother, clear message and imagery to match!
Keep keeping on:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Always! Thank you man!
Yup. Throwing out the pain left after a broken relationship. Nicely written :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

No problem :) so i've got the meaning right?
sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Yes you did, but I would really like to hear what it means to you...
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

What it means to me... Well, in this write i've seen what i will do. As a matter of fact, after a re.. read more
Ooooh I like this. It touches the painful experiences of my own heart...and, release..
thank you. :) A

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I'm glad it could do so!
Thank you so much for reading, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Greenpeace will not be happy with you for polluting the oceans with such toxic waste...lol.
Seriously though sloughing off old memories of hurt is a healthy action. As long as those waves don't bring them back to your shores all is good.
Although this write is relatively short, it sparks the imagination of the reader. I sat wondering wheather I would metaphorically toss them or write it all out and do the hole bottle thing. Not PC I know, but totally satisfying.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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JayceeC

9 Years Ago

Hey can't RR from phone but tell me what you think of my new one? Ending too much?
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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Sure, what's it called?
I have so many RR stacked up on me right now... every time I get it d.. read more
Sin in Sincerity: I love it!!! How creative you are....the visual is so impactful and it made me smile, thinking, aww, that's what we need. All those broken hearts; what a blissful dream, how easy life would be. Great writing. Thank you so much. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dale, I am glad you enjoyed it!
Confuser

9 Years Ago

My pleasure, it's very good.
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Throwing away your negativity into a beautiful sea
that does do the act of soul cleansing


Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and leaving a note hon, I really appreciate it!

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