Where?

Where?

A Poem by sinNsincerity

The car was taking us

somewhere,

but I was already

where I wanted to

be…


© 2016 sinNsincerity


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Nice...Short and sweet but very well done. I like it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you Stephen.
Heck, if Hallmark don't buy this off you, I'll eat my hat. It has that 'ahhh' quality which may seem to some to be derisory but I (and millions of others apparently) seem to enjoy such sentiment.
Good one Sin. :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Why thank you Anto!
I really appreciate that!
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No need for cars there
Awesome and sweet

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you hon!
Very simple but tells the story... good work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reading Aaron.
Very simple, but it says so much about love. A quick wa of saying "it doesn't matter where we go, as long as we're together. " There is not a woman in the world who would not love to be the recipient of this from her man. A wonderful write Sin.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

To me that's what total love is all about you know... Whether if it's a women to me, friend, or fami.. read more
So sweet! I love it, well done :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you did Erin. Thank you!
Conciseness is key. How sweet a thought you have expressed

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you Sydney.
I love how this is so simple, yet so sincere at the same time. If I received that from a special someone, just in the form of a little note or something, my heart would just melt! Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Why thank you Elisa. That means so much to me. XD
simple, powerful, hopeful and lovely. I have to say I found myself smile though out this whole piece. I love that you resisted the urge to make it long and wordy, its perfect just as is.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you Crystal. Yea, I bought this little 3 by 4 inch note book, so it's pretty small and I've ju.. read more

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Added on June 12, 2015
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East Los Angeles, CA



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