Eros

My curse…

I’m so willing to

disperse 

an erection

of memories, hopes,

and feelings.

I won’t ever imply to hurt,

or would I disrespect yours.

I only want to penetrate

and impregnate your

hearts and watch our love grow!

Reviews

[Alice Poésy]

I love the use of sexual words in a sense of innocence. Popular society loves to paint sex as something vulgar, removing the true sense of affection and/or love from its act. This is very "anti-pop", and clever, needless to say, and I, of course, possessing these qualities, love it.

Great work.

[sinNsincerity]

Very much so, I love to take the views of normalcy and mend them with my heart, soul, and mind. Separating the passion from compassion, which people highly confuse one from thee other.
I'm very well pleased that you can relate and that you enjoyed it.

[ANTO]

Quite hormonal SiS and provocative in its thinly vieled metaphor.
I like it. It forcefully pushes at the hymen of poetry

[sinNsincerity]

Oh my lord! You made me bust up with this one Anto!
The hymen of poetry, too funny!

[ANTO]

Oh my word. Im sooo dead for that. I wrote that pre-coffee this morning lol

[sereenaoutloud]

LMAO this it too funny!! :)

[~]

I think we need to rate this page XXX now and flick the red lights on lol

[sereenaoutloud]

hahahah MS...it was such funny response to such a great poem! They both made me smile!!

[sinNsincerity]

It's all good. It mad my day!

[sinNsincerity]

The red lights on currently on guys =D

[sereenaoutloud]

LOL made me smile too!! :) ...both the write and the comment! :)

[~]

A very peculiar Cupid this one :D

[Jamestown]

Intense desire to find that special someone!
Love the raw emotion and willingness to pen them:)
All in due time, God has a plan for the good guys:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

I actually wrote this for anyone who reads this. Not just for a certain someone.
That's why I say, "impregnate your 'hearts.'"
Thank you for reading James!

[Pratik Mishra]

Hmm... Well written. :) ..........

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[B]

The intensity and the urge
of being with that one person

WAW

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Nisreenaa!