Eros

My curse…

I’m so willing to

disperse 

an erection

of memories, hopes,

and feelings.

I won’t ever imply to hurt,

or would I disrespect yours.

I only want to penetrate

and impregnate your

hearts and watch our love grow!

Reviews

[Alice Poésy]

I love the use of sexual words in a sense of innocence. Popular society loves to paint sex as something vulgar, removing the true sense of affection and/or love from its act. This is very "anti-pop", and clever, needless to say, and I, of course, possessing these qualities, love it.

Great work.

[sinNsincerity]

Very much so, I love to take the views of normalcy and mend them with my heart, soul, and mind. Separating the passion from compassion, which people highly confuse one from thee other.
I'm very well pleased that you can relate and that you enjoyed it.

[TheOne&Only]

haha cute poem!! I really enjoyed this read...pleasurable! :)

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you enjoyed it hon!

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This poem impregnated my heart with adorable arrows :)

[sinNsincerity]

I am so glad to hear that Lynn!

[AaronFreitas]

Nice deep words my friend... love the creativity!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[jeannemarie coulter]

you write to open the mind of others...this is a very good action...impregnating minds with new ideas...

[sinNsincerity]

I would hope that I may open minds as has mine has been.
I just hope their brains don't fall out =D.

[jeannemarie coulter]

keep writing and reading and be alive with love and laughter...jc

[dan]

That's a very impressive erection. Where is Cupid in all this, snapping a selfie? A quirky but clever write, my friend. take care...dan

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Dan.
Selfies for days!

[sereenaoutloud]

This is a very creative metaphor use...you worded it just right making it beautiful ...very clever Bestie or should i say My little winged angel ...lol

[sinNsincerity]

I've misplaced my wings somewhere out there. lol I'm trying to find them again =D
Thank so much Bestie! Love ya!

[sereenaoutloud]

lol ,..oh this reminds me of a funny quote (have not idea who said it but have it on my FB page)
read morelol ,..oh this reminds me of a funny quote (have not idea who said it but have it on my FB page)
"I am an angel, i just got pushed off a cloud, broke my wings, lost my robe and some jackass in NY stole my halo"
LOL

[sinNsincerity]

Damn those New Yorkers! Jk.
I want to live in NY for a few years!

[sereenaoutloud]

LOl... That would be cool...a place for sure i would like to visit!!

[sinNsincerity]

Totally, one day!

[Angela Sparks]

This is a cute poem . Very lovely:)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so and reading Angela!

[wordman]

and now my friend you are cupid,a clever write

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Wordman!

[wordman]

you`re welcome sin

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Very well done. Wantin to start a family?

[sinNsincerity]

All in due time, but for now, all of y'all are my family.

[Saurabh7677]

really intense and deep thoughts are required to write such a beautiful poem....well written:)

[sinNsincerity]

Why thank you! You words are highly appreciated.