Eros

My curse…

I’m so willing to

disperse 

an erection

of memories, hopes,

and feelings.

I won’t ever imply to hurt,

or would I disrespect yours.

I only want to penetrate

and impregnate your

hearts and watch our love grow!

Reviews

[Alice Poésy]

I love the use of sexual words in a sense of innocence. Popular society loves to paint sex as something vulgar, removing the true sense of affection and/or love from its act. This is very "anti-pop", and clever, needless to say, and I, of course, possessing these qualities, love it.

Great work.

[sinNsincerity]

Very much so, I love to take the views of normalcy and mend them with my heart, soul, and mind. Separating the passion from compassion, which people highly confuse one from thee other.
I'm very well pleased that you can relate and that you enjoyed it.

[Saddam]

and impregnate your
hearts and watch our love grow!

Its great friend.
Like its idea and massage.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you.

[Debosmita B.]

Very thoughtful! The poem is multi-layered and that's the best thing about it!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading and thinking so Debosmita!

[Debosmita B.]

You're welcome! :)

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

* Fans Face* Awesome comparison between act of sex and wanting love. You did it in a way that hasn't been done yet, and it was not the typically reference of the two. I relished in the phasing and word choice. Great Job

[sinNsincerity]

This made me smile =D
Thank you crystal!

[SirMangosven]

Yes very interesting putting the sexuality in, great job

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading and thinking so!

[Krystal Jones]

Interesting way to deliver a message. The sexuality was entrancing, and the message was beautiful. Keep on writing!!

[sinNsincerity]

thank you so much for thinking so Krystal!

[JayceeC]

Your Cupid is such a deliciously naughty creature. ..lol Loved the sexually overt Imagery as a contrast to a bit softer message.

[sinNsincerity]

Only when he wants to be hehe =D
I'm glad you enjoyed it Jan!

[Rana]

A nice write, those read like the words of a poet speaking to his readers, it's a different kind of love, quite sensitive too. Liked the way you put it.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Rana! It is always a pleasure to you from you.

[Melinda McQueen]

What a sweet poem of love.
A nice write.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you enjoyed it Melinda.
Thank you so much for reading.

[andrew mitchell]

Impregnation it is, this is! as a fab write

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Andrew!

[Matching Socks]

Aww, very sweet. :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Ana.