Goldilocks

Time is snoring...Zzzz…

And I’m snoring after a

stolen meal of porridge.

The beast came and

awoken me.

Moma bear is very

pleased with what

she sees.

She says she loves,

but truly,

She’s plotting on devouring

me!

Reviews

[Nadia B.]

This poem actually scared me, and I don't scare so easily in poetry, but you write so well! I like how you personify time in sleep, and compare it to a thief, the sly grin of someone who seems pleased, but is waiting to turn into a beast. Your last line is full of power evoking feelings of fear and tread and worry, that brings the whole story to life and makes it real. Really well done!

[sinNsincerity]

That's just great and made me smile!
Thank you Nadia!

[Jamestown]

Wow! Pretty interesting write my brother,
I will ask about it later,thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[Sindu]

Moma bear is very
pleased with what
she sees.
She says she loves,.... when I read that I went like ' whats wrong with you mama bear?!'

then i read it on and laughed thinking ' now that's more like mama bear!'

Enjoyed this little fairy tale

[sinNsincerity]

hehe =D It's one of the ones I wrote yesterday...
I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I thought it would be something fun to play with.