The Dead Zone

I write poems on the daily.

More like every

single moment.

The ones I write

in my dome.

The ones that are

left alone.

The ones that are

forever a slave to

the twilight zone.

The dead zone!

The ghost of every

dead poem I

have ever wrote…

Have no home!

Reviews

[Celie Rose]

Some poems are better left alone. Especially, "The ones that are
forever a slave to the twilight zone. The dead zone!"
Maybe at a later time they will be worth taking a second look.
Perhaps a new and different meaning. Not in the dead zone anymore. You'll never know unless...
Good job. Keep writing.

[sinNsincerity]

Yes, Unless...
Thank you for reading!

[Tomoe Tellez]

I guess most of every writer's poems live forever in the twilight zone, we don't always share everything we write, sometimes for fear, sometimes because we want to keep for ourselves. Great job!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm quite sure as well. I took me a long time before I decided to share my mind, body, soul, and heart with you all.

[FallenAlone]

it is really an interesting poem, and beautifully unique. I think all our poems have a dead zone, the twilight zone as you say, and most of them are our discarded drafts. Well penned :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[Whitney]

I like this because I relate to it. I have a dead zone filled with poems that I will never share. Keep writing!

[sinNsincerity]

Maybe when the time is right...
For, I just don't care anymore about what people think...
read moreMaybe when the time is right...
For, I just don't care anymore about what people think...
They can read it and think it's great, or they may hate it... I'm fine with either hehe
Thank you once again Whitney, it's my pleasure!

[Whitney]

Maybe I will release my other stuff when the time is right too. That is a good mentality to have.

[sinNsincerity]

Very much so =D

[SheIsMe]

I feel this one. The daily writes and the ones that never get shared because they are THAT bad/dark. Great job!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you a bunches!

[Red Music]

Simply great..Love it!!!!!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[Myenigma]

i like your poem and the idea behind it,

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you, I'm really glad that you did.

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
Keep in writing!!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[Insight "MH"]

This poem is the bedrock for greatness!

If these dead ghost poems haunt you, who do you gonna call? ............. ^_^

Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

[sinNsincerity]

I don't call anyone.
I just smoke and drink them away...

[B. Boileau]

Sin you created the words every writer has thought at one time or another. I stopped writting quite a while ago, at the time I had tons of unfinished and finished but unshared work that now is forever lost.
For those it was never ment to be. It's ok though, because there's always the future, and more words to be written. Nice work !
bill

[sinNsincerity]

I'm quite sure that they do. I had been thinking about writing on the subject for a whole month before I had the willingness to put it to paper hehe