Theatrical Scene ~ Infinity

Future, present, and past…

The days will everlast.

Relapse?

More like a nightcap

Mr. bottle caps

Number 7, Jack.

The confines of my mind...

More like outside the lines,

More like undefined,

More like it’s…,

I’m fine.

Welcome to my high!

Love blows me away

I’m afraid

Please say it’s okay…

Does she still love me?

Can she still find me?

My chest is glowing!

I’m holding,

A snowing for she.

Come melt me!

Reviews

[Nadia B.]

Your third stanza is a masterpiece to read! This poem is golden, it has the melancholy feel, satirical flair, the sad yet hopeful, a passionate end and circular read that ties in with your concept of infinity. I could read this over and over again, the word selection and sentence structure is eloquent and well decided upon. You have a masterful talent. Please never stop writing, and thank you for sharing such artistic beauty!

[sinNsincerity]

That means the world to me and I'm left speechless...
Thank you Nadia!

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

magnificent! I adore when people take the standard sweet love poems and make it new and refreshing and that is what you did. bravo!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Crystal!
It is very tough to do so and that makes me smile to hear what you have to say. =D

[Sindu]

Incredibly theatrical, Mr Sin =)
An erratic mind with sort of a relapse, entertaining drinks and incredible ending of melting love. I love the accurate words, imagery and the ridiculous words you use which seem right.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Mrs. Sin =D
You have summed it up quite well.
I'm really happy that you enjoyed it and rather loved it Sindu!
As always, thank you!

[Sindu]

Ahem.. Mrs? lol
You're welcome :)

[sinNsincerity]

Oh, oh, Ms. Sin. Lol
=D

[Sindu]

Haha.. =)

[dan]

A steady build-up to the final crescendo asking to be melted like the Wicked Witch seeing a water splash turn her to a vapor. The imagery imbued in the write is pinpoint and accurate, steering the mood toward the richness of the powerful conclusion...nice! take care...dan

[sinNsincerity]

A build up indeed!
Thank you so much for your thoughts Dan. The wicked witch, I love that!read moreA build up indeed!
Thank you so much for your thoughts Dan. The wicked witch, I love that!
Thank you for reading, I really appreciate it.
-David

[Ankita]

wonderful piece :) and indeed the last is perfect :)

once again i have to ask you the significance of the title.. :D

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so Ankita!
I was actually going to name it "Confines Undefined," because my thinking is limitless...
But then again, I called the confines of my mine a "theatrical scene" and I put infinity because that's the way I see life, infinite!
That's way I say, "Future, present, and past." It's all one time...
"The days will everlast," indicates time is infinite.
"Relapse," tells no matter how much the time is changing and moving forward, it really doesn't and everything remains the same. at least in my eyes. lol
Thank you so much for reading hon.
I highly appreciate it!

[Ankita]

wow! you do think very deep :)

But i would disagree with you on the fact that time and people do not change..
They do change..
change is the only constant thing.

[B]

Love the last line

Come melt me

Asking your lover to simply take it all
Melting into nothing
and in the instant gaining it all

Because you truly and honestly are bravely giving it all

[sinNsincerity]

Yes very much so, I am...
Thank you so much for reading Nisreenaa.
Your thoughts speak wonders to me. =D

[B]

Thanks :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[Jamestown]

This is a work of art with words and a drink or 7!
I really believe that your finding your groove with this
poetry thing my talented brother:) Thanks for sharing
and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thanks a bunches James that means a whole lot to me man.
God bless you!