Who's this?

Ring…

Hello?

She replied,

“It’s destiny.”

Is this faith?

Is this meant to be..?

“No!,

Don’t be stupid silly.

My name is Destiny.”

Oh, pardon me

For reacting so selfishly.

She speaks about

All of my problems

And insecurities.

Lip service!

Shaking up my thoughts.

It’s turbulence!

My over reaction

Is her favorite fetish.

“What’s your problem?

You need help!

Just forget it.”

The longer you stay with me

The more you’ll regret it.

I’m reckless!

Looking for another

Emotions get her super jealous.

Clock work…

What time is it?

Eleven past seven.

Smile so bright

It raises her height.

Losing the weight

Of madness...

Trimming it down

With wet lettuce.

The potholes on the

Surface of my bones

Run deep into my soul.

I could never reach

Her with my hands,

And that’s why she can’t ever

Let me go...

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow..
An extraordinary piece of work. It kept me completely engrossed from the first letter till the last.
I loved this whirlpool of emotions portrayed in so few words.
Amazingly surreal. End is a bit sad but life is all about these feelings, right?
Love can be hell of a force to handle sometimes, isn't it?
Happy I came across this! Enjoyed it!

[sinNsincerity]

I've very glad that you think so Jyoti!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Me too. Good day.

[wordman]

a great write sin,and i loved the format

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you SIr!
It's always a pleasure to hear from you!

[LauraraMonique]

THIS WAS AMAZING! And sooooo unique. I loved it. Thank you so much for taking the time to share this piece! It's perfect to me!

Blessed Be!

Laurara Monique

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Laurara!
Always blesses!
Have a great day!

[Jamestown]

Another great piece of work, with a well thought out structure
and delivered message:) You never seize to amaze me with what you
have up that sleeve of yours, as always unique and cool!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading bro!

[Cara]

wow amazing, i love it thank you for sharing

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Cara!

[Ruth]

Ahh, destiny is a force unto herself lol Over reaction is the thriving emotion she seeks but groundedness makes her knees weak ;) lol Awesome piece xo

[sinNsincerity]

Yes exactly!
Thank you for reading Ruth!
Always a pleasure.

[Ishita Dixit]

The longer you stay with me, the more you'll regret it.
^ hell yess!
With every new poem that you add, the list of my favourite
quotes increases.
So don't stop.
Do this all day. Everyday. ;)

[sinNsincerity]

Oh stop it! =D
I'll do my my best to do so...
Thank you Ishita.

[KWP]

well that's very cool ... what came to mind immediately for some reason is Jim Carey's commencement speech to the Graduates (look it up) ... this kind of speaks in volumes ... to self to all and yet also settles back on a relation between two XX

[sinNsincerity]

I have actually watched it before. I liked it.
Thank you for reading and spending the time to reply.