Who's this?

Ring…

Hello?

She replied,

“It’s destiny.”

Is this faith?

Is this meant to be..?

“No!,

Don’t be stupid silly.

My name is Destiny.”

Oh, pardon me

For reacting so selfishly.

She speaks about

All of my problems

And insecurities.

Lip service!

Shaking up my thoughts.

It’s turbulence!

My over reaction

Is her favorite fetish.

“What’s your problem?

You need help!

Just forget it.”

The longer you stay with me

The more you’ll regret it.

I’m reckless!

Looking for another

Emotions get her super jealous.

Clock work…

What time is it?

Eleven past seven.

Smile so bright

It raises her height.

Losing the weight

Of madness...

Trimming it down

With wet lettuce.

The potholes on the

Surface of my bones

Run deep into my soul.

I could never reach

Her with my hands,

And that’s why she can’t ever

Let me go...

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow..
An extraordinary piece of work. It kept me completely engrossed from the first letter till the last.
I loved this whirlpool of emotions portrayed in so few words.
Amazingly surreal. End is a bit sad but life is all about these feelings, right?
Love can be hell of a force to handle sometimes, isn't it?
Happy I came across this! Enjoyed it!

[sinNsincerity]

I've very glad that you think so Jyoti!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Me too. Good day.

[Devious13]

I have no words and I just am torn for I took this in a differen way I think I am hurt and see it as though ............. well its very touching I know that make s me realize just how much love I have for a certain somebody and its as always right om the money and I feel now I should let the persom wherever they are how much whoever has them is lucky and if I did it w oild mot be the same

[sinNsincerity]

it's all just a hurricane isn't it...

[Ana B.]

Wow, this is marvellous SiS, my favorite of yours :) You are a romantic at heart.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Ana! I do my best...

[erinwrites]

This was great to read! And I loved the format and the play on "Destiny" at the beginning

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Erin! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it.

[sereenaoutloud]

Putting a voice to destiny...so very clever and with my friend!
Loved the format it adds to the conversation going back and forth!
Your are the Bestest! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sereena, You're the Bestest!

[sereenaoutloud]

NO ..you are ..hehee like that conversation that never ends...you hang up..no you hang up lol
I keep missing you on here.
hope all is well with you BFF!

[sinNsincerity]

It never ends =D
I know I've been so busy with school as of late.
The writing will come though when it's ready...

[nazia]

As I have said earlier also, love the dialogue form of write. you really are bettering yourself day by day, though these days I am a bit occupied, I love to come here and read your work. its so refreshing and different in many ways. Nice write :)

[sinNsincerity]

I'm really glad that you see that in me and that means so much.
It is always a pleasure to hear from you Nazia!

[Sarah Hampton]

Creative writing at it's best! The formatting fits perfectly. I love the last four lines, there is so much wisdom in them it's like being smacked in the face with truth. Seriously, brilliant.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sarah! I really appreciate it!

[AaronFreitas]

I love this one... great flow in this piece. Your swag really shines through in this piece... I see you walking the streets with a nice pimp lean now! haha great work!

[sinNsincerity]

Not a pimp lol Thank you for reading Aaron!

[Willard Wells]

Very nice writing and I liked the format. thank you.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[alf]

Hi Sin in Sincerity. What a brilliant write. I loved how you explored those thoughts and explained them!! t thought your potholes, wet lettuce and fetishes were just soooo good!!! destiny is with us all, love how you have personified her!!! truly enjoyed the read, alf

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Alf.
I really appreciate it!