Wow..
An extraordinary piece of work. It kept me completely engrossed from the first letter till the last.
I loved this whirlpool of emotions portrayed in so few words.
Amazingly surreal. End is a bit sad but life is all about these feelings, right?
Love can be hell of a force to handle sometimes, isn't it?
Happy I came across this! Enjoyed it!
Wow..
An extraordinary piece of work. It kept me completely engrossed from the first letter till the last.
I loved this whirlpool of emotions portrayed in so few words.
Amazingly surreal. End is a bit sad but life is all about these feelings, right?
Love can be hell of a force to handle sometimes, isn't it?
Happy I came across this! Enjoyed it!
I have no words and I just am torn for I took this in a differen way I think I am hurt and see it as though ............. well its very touching I know that make s me realize just how much love I have for a certain somebody and its as always right om the money and I feel now I should let the persom wherever they are how much whoever has them is lucky and if I did it w oild mot be the same
Putting a voice to destiny...so very clever and with my friend!
Loved the format it adds to the conversation going back and forth!
Your are the Bestest! :)
NO ..you are ..hehee like that conversation that never ends...you hang up..no you hang up lol
.. read moreNO ..you are ..hehee like that conversation that never ends...you hang up..no you hang up lol
I keep missing you on here.
hope all is well with you BFF!
9 Years Ago
It never ends =D
I know I've been so busy with school as of late.
The writing will com.. read moreIt never ends =D
I know I've been so busy with school as of late.
The writing will come though when it's ready...
As I have said earlier also, love the dialogue form of write. you really are bettering yourself day by day, though these days I am a bit occupied, I love to come here and read your work. its so refreshing and different in many ways. Nice write :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
I'm really glad that you see that in me and that means so much.
It is always a pleasure to he.. read moreI'm really glad that you see that in me and that means so much.
It is always a pleasure to hear from you Nazia!
Creative writing at it's best! The formatting fits perfectly. I love the last four lines, there is so much wisdom in them it's like being smacked in the face with truth. Seriously, brilliant.
I love this one... great flow in this piece. Your swag really shines through in this piece... I see you walking the streets with a nice pimp lean now! haha great work!
Hi Sin in Sincerity. What a brilliant write. I loved how you explored those thoughts and explained them!! t thought your potholes, wet lettuce and fetishes were just soooo good!!! destiny is with us all, love how you have personified her!!! truly enjoyed the read, alf
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9 Years Ago
Thank you for thinking so Alf.
I really appreciate it!