(My 6 to My 9) ONE

I+ was one thing to learn how to forgive someone,

But the hardest thing to do in my life was to forgive myself.

Chaining my ego, while it awaits to be released for apocalypse now…,

But for now……………………………………………………………………………………~>

I’m looking down

         l

         l

        V

but I;m slipping

Nine f**k ups’ in my mind

For one good decision.

9 is numerology

I am 🂩

My moon

So crescent '

Where are you?

The residue of my past life

when both our soul intertwined.

A rare kind

More like 1 of a kind because

God removed you from the rest of my rib5

Downcast me into the ocean

To live as a crustacean,

And now I have to find you...

surrendered my grasp

so that ! could never fall apart

the anti -to- you gravity

My antithesis

The reason why

I compose these

In -and- complete sentences.

Our hearts were literate

but we could never put our finger on

I+

B3c@use WE LIVED OUTSIDE of the “...“

Reviews

[Sultrysoul]

A great to describe the mistakes we reflect on when someone slips past you and you feel it's because the mistakes you make outweigh the good you try to give. You feel like your drowning. Crashing from the sky. This is what I feel when reading this. I really enjoyed reading this

[sinNsincerity]

Yes, reflecting on them and by saying I'm looking down, I'm saying I've moved passed it, so when I say I'm slipping, that means that it doesn't take much to get back there.
So when I say she's the 6 to my 9 it is a unity of one because 69 represents my horoscope of being a cancer.

This is what the number 9 mean to me...
"Number 9 is the number of Universal love, eternity, faith, Universal Spiritual Laws, the concept of karma, spiritual enlightenment, spiritual awakening, service to humanity, humanitarianism and the humanitarian, lightworking and lightworkers, leading by positive example, philanthropy and the philanthropist, charity, self-sacrifice, selflessness, destiny, life purpose and soul mission, generosity, a a higher perspective, romance, inner-strength, public relations, responsibility, intuition, strength of character."
I love the way this made you feel. I find it breathtaking!
It really makes writing well worth it when others can tell me what the words make them feel rather trying to understand what I'm trying to say, so I deeply appreciate you sharing your thoughts and feelings with me!

[Sultrysoul]

I appreciate that and your writing is an inspiration to stir emotions whatever they may be. That is what good writing should do

[Yanina McKnight]

I like the creative structure. The short phrases enhanced the meaning of your ideas. I can easily see the chaos in one's mind intertwined with unsteady emotions. I really enjoyed reading this piece!
-Yanina

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Yanina!
I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!
It's my pleasure!

[Yanina McKnight]

Yes of course, you're very welcome!!

[JayceeC]

I like the bit of visual added and the numerology in place if words/letters. It's not so much that it's totally distracting from your message. Self forgiveness is often much harder than forgiving others, and to my mind if your major screw-ups are numbered in single digits, then you are not doing too badly.

[sinNsincerity]

Well I'm a Cancer and that is why I named the title "6 to my 9" because 69 is the symbol for it, so I thought it would be clever. Also the # 9 resonates with me a whole lot, so I researched it and I found out that 9 represents me so well.

[JayceeC]

Sometimes I use things in My poems like this and people just miss it.But I must say that in regular type the 69 just brings whole other thoughts to your title ;-)

[sinNsincerity]

hehe yea i figured, but that's what I love about this site. People may and have the chance to ask why i chose to write such things...

[AaronFreitas]

Forgiving ourselves is not easy... sometimes it's impossible as we are our own biggest critic. Nice write buddy!

[sinNsincerity]

Leaning to do so has released me from so much bull s**t
Thank you for reading Aaron!

[Real Inspiration]

This is amazing! The way it pulled me in and allowed my brain to travel with such thought, inspired me deeply. Thank you for writing with such talent. I appreciate your being. :)

[sinNsincerity]

I appreciate your words and spending the time to read.
It means the world to me that you could find some inspiration in my writing.

[yvo miki]

wow I liked the rare way u wrote it

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you enjoyed it Yvo.
Thank you for reading.

[yvo miki]

ur welcome

[wordman]

ahh! the biggest struggle of a christian is forgiveness
you did a great job

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[wordman]

you are welcome

[TheOne&Only]

I got to say, your a very creative writer!! I enjoyed this piece.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading and thinking so hon.
Have to think outside the box =D

[Cara]

i like it, thank you for sharing

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading.

[Abilash Uttama]

it can be quite hard to forgive ourselves. i don't know why we go so hard on ourselves but to err is human, so we should learn from mistakes rather than hating ourselves for that. Anyways nice structure and wonderful poem. nice work!

[sinNsincerity]

Yep, it's all about making corrections and progress.
Baby steps...

[Jamestown]

This is a well written and executed piece of work my friend!
The message is bold and the structure is unique and well thought out,
forgiveness is hard but as you said to forgive ourselves is even tougher,
it's that old saying, " I'm my own worst critic " it's because we expect more
from ourselves, that's actually a good thing, can you imagine if we just didn't
give a F like some of these low life's that we are unfortunately sharing earth with?
Great work brother, stay blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Yea this is one of my favorites yet..
Thank you for reading brother.