Hell Yes

God must dislike me

And think that I’m a peasant

Since I don’t allow you to return back to heaven.

Here’s a whisper,

You are more than I could ever want

Or imagine!

Such a delightful present.

A gift,

An angel,

My love!

Please doll,

Don’t ever stop blessing

Me with your presence.

I’m overwhelmed with joy...

Just like a child with their very first toy!

Reviews

[Sindu]

I agree.. You left us hanging but in smileworthy kind of way ( Smile away)
When I read works like this, very rarely it makes my heart beat. Most of the time I go like.. Cheesy though I like it.
This is somewhere between sweet and raw, just on the edge. Interesting! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Sindu, I really appreciate it!

[Ruth]

Holding on something beautiful here...moved me...lovely...

[sinNsincerity]

That makes me happy to hear!
Thank you so much for reading Ruth =D

[Rana]

A sweetly simple poem, flowing well and ending in a nice simile.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Rana!
I appreciate you spending the time =D

[Etta Beasley]

I love how smooth it rolls off the lips.. As always beautifully written.

[sinNsincerity]

Why thank you! Smooth like mash potatoes!

[B]

A very joyful piece
Filled with flirting

Very light and sweet

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Nisreena =D

[Sydney]

Again, very simple but revealing so much. Very sweet, longing tone. Almost childish in a good way. Just the innocence.. Good write

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome piece buddy... loved it!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you man.

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Sweet sentiment, I like the simplicity and innocents in this piece,
You are always one of my favorites to read, thanks for sharing
and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you brother! That means Honey BUNCHES of Oats to me!

[Jesse]

You have your very own style that I like! Nice!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you like it.
Thank you so much Jesse!