Babycakes

Hey babycakes,

bake it in cakes for me.

A man’s weakness is his stomach when it aches

aside from his love and when his heart breaks.

You know me…

You’re too sweet.

And I’ll eat you out,

even with a billion toothaches!

No forks or plates.

I’m a nasty mate.

Only for you.

I need you.

I don’t want to suffer anymore.

From my outside down to my core,

I need you even more.

I promise that I’ll never hurt you because I care.

Though you know I’m always up to kiss fight.

Beat you up in bed and then come back for seconds 

and then thirds.

And If another dude were to make you cry,

I’ll bop him over the head.

I’m a lover not a fighter,

but remember Tupac said,

“Every one in LA got a lil thug in em.”

I don’t want to be a pest like the stupid gum stuck under your shoe.

Needless to say,

just know my heart exceeds the pain

just for you!

Reviews

[ANTO]

Love is War. And an army marches to war on its stomach so ...yeah ...baby cakes is definitely required in the war of love.

I don't know why I had Kelis singing 'Milkshake' in my head all the way through this one Sin.
Nice penning my friend, especially liked the pest/chewing gum analogy - cool as...

[sinNsincerity]

This made me laugh so hard in class and every one stared at me like a weirdo haha
Thank you Anto!

[wordman]

true love,wanting ,needing not to be alone

[sinNsincerity]

Totally!
Thank you for reading Kind Sir!

[Angela]

This was super cute, and I smiled throughout it. I love your style of writing. I feel as if I can picture everything. :)

[sinNsincerity]

That's what I love to hear and why I write =D
Thank you so much for reading Angela!

[Jamestown]

Another fine piece of work my friend, your wording always makes me smile!
I don't want to pest like the stupid gum stuck to your shoe, very funny I
hate when that happens! Keep up the great work and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad it made you smile man!
Thanks for reading brother =D

[Jamestown]

UR WELCOME!

[Melinda McQueen]

A cute love poem.
Thanks for sharing.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for for reading and thinking so Melinda!

[Ishita Dixit]

I'll eat you out even with a billion toothaches!
Awww!

[sinNsincerity]

hehe yes!
Thank you for reading love =D

[AaronFreitas]

Sweet talk it big dawg! haha and I think everyone that's ever listened to Pac has a little thug in em... gotta represent lol good work!

[sinNsincerity]

That s**t was cool huh!

[Etta Beasley]

Dirty talk at its finest 😘

Really creative and funny.. Good write!

[sinNsincerity]

It really is lol
Thank your for reading Etta!

[Etta Beasley]

Of course ☺

[Sydney]

this should probably be rated mature, just a thought. Good write mate

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading mate!