Babycakes

Babycakes

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Hey babycakes,

bake it in cakes for me.

A man’s weakness is his stomach when it aches

aside from his love and when his heart breaks.

You know me…

You’re too sweet.

And I’ll eat you out,

even with a billion toothaches!

No forks or plates.

I’m a nasty mate.

Only for you.

I need you.

I don’t want to suffer anymore.

From my outside down to my core,

I need you even more.

I promise that I’ll never hurt you because I care.

Though you know I’m always up to kiss fight.

Beat you up in bed and then come back for seconds 

and then thirds.

And If another dude were to make you cry,

I’ll bop him over the head.

I’m a lover not a fighter,

but remember Tupac said,

“Every one in LA got a lil thug in em.”

I don’t want to be a pest like the stupid gum stuck under your shoe.

Needless to say,

just know my heart exceeds the pain

just for you!



© 2018 sinNsincerity


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Love is War. And an army marches to war on its stomach so ...yeah ...baby cakes is definitely required in the war of love.

I don't know why I had Kelis singing 'Milkshake' in my head all the way through this one Sin.
Nice penning my friend, especially liked the pest/chewing gum analogy - cool as...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

This made me laugh so hard in class and every one stared at me like a weirdo haha
Thank you A.. read more



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I was grinning through the whole thing and silently laughing. Good thing my dad didn't observe me. Thank you phones n TV!
I would like a man who can cook for me once on a while.. Sweet and sexy!
Kiss fights, toothaches... Hahaaa.. loved it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

You don't know any guy's who would cook for you? They better learn!
What mad you grin that yo.. read more
Sindu

9 Years Ago

Im not saying anything about that :P
sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I guess my imagination is going to have to do... ;)
fine word tapestry...well written

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jeanne!
hehe - i like this for its feisty yet fun nature :) it is rather cute too - I made brownies - do you like brownies - of course you do !!!

I like the Tupac quote coming in out of nowhere to - random house makes life light up X

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Double fudge brownies. hehe
I'm always trying to write something different, experiment, and j.. read more
KWP

9 Years Ago

yeah I like it ...
KWP

9 Years Ago

I just sent you a RR for one i did the same with - love your thoughts X
who is this for?its cute and sweet and kinda durty witch is cute lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

It's about the love of my life, but she is no longer in the picture...
yvo miki

9 Years Ago

awww im sorry
"You're too sweet, and I'll eat you out even with a billion toothaches.."- Is this meant to be sexual?


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Yes, very sexual.
Good one and so true... the way to a man's heart, straight through to the stomach, no matter the dish! This is full of pains and longings. Good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you Jen.
Yep, especially me. I love to eat!
aww now this is a cutie petootie of a a write.! Smiling the whole way through and your words...beautiful ..and the imagery...class! kiss fight ..love it!
Sweet...SweetSin

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

It was just a small sample of my dorky side. I'm really happy that you enjoyed it!
Thank you .. read more
Sounds like she's baking with cream here.. this was a really fun write to read, I had to grin through the whole first half. This just struck me with such a playful tone, and "Kiss fight" just solidified that.
Only change would be in the last line. I'd change to "my heart's joy exceeds..."
I like the Tupac quote. It actually reminds me of my younger daughter who should have been born in LA..LOL She's my white child from da hood. (And she would definitely be telling me, "Mom, don't ever say that again"

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

hahaha That's really funny! I can imagine your daughter telling you that.
Thank you so much f.. read more
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Lol

Cute and i was laughing

Sweet

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I'm glad that you could get a laugh out of it!
Thank you for reading.
You have a very unique and memorable style of writing. I like this. It's cute.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Why thank you Brittany!
That means the world to me.
Thank you for reading.

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