Hey You!

And it breaks my heart…

Why?

Each time

A piece of me dies

When I give

You all a piece of me

Within this

Poe-try.

Go ahead my loves,

Try!

Please don’t cry!

Our love was at its

Prime

And never had to play

The part when it had to

Comply with daily life.

If you’re reading,

Would you come back for

A second slice?

Or would you prefer

An other kind?

Would you place the taste in

The back of your mind,

Or will you cherish every

Bite and say,

“It’s all mine!?”

The delicate fingertip that just

Waltzed up your spine is

The cool breeze I sneezed down

From the moonlit sky.

Muah!

Say goodnight…

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Even with me liking it I am left with an inability to express my thoughts on what I have read. Giving of yourself and hoping to be remembered by your love as you give freely of yourself. The imagery was very nice. The gentle touch of a lovers fingers can mean so much. iAnd the final question in all love is, is it mutual. Thank you for sharing.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading Mr. Wells!

[ANTO]

You're a modern romantic Sin. This is avant garde poetry. You're a trend setter dear writer.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Anto, I highly appreciate it!
It's great to hear from you!

[ANTO]

Nice of you to say so Sin. You're a gentleman.

[Ana B.]

Beautiful, exhilirating and sensual, a gorgeous piece...the part with the waltz across the spine is awesome :)

[sinNsincerity]

That's amazing to hear, I almost wrote something else, but decided to go with the waltz one instead.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Thank you for reading Ana.

[Ana B.]

Anytime SiS :)

[Madhu]

Something beautifully different! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so!

[AaronFreitas]

A very creative piece... always a good read when it's you buddy!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Aaron!

[sereenaoutloud]

I so enjoy your writes, you are very creative and have your own style that just keeps getting better and better!!
Another great one Sweet Sin :))

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Sereena!
That means a great deal to me.
Always a pleasure Bestie =D

[613]

This is a great piece of work. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great work!

- Brittney

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much!

[613]

Sure thing!

[Jamestown]

Another great piece of work brother!
I always get a kick at the word play and sincerity in your work,
you are really showing your gift off here at the cafe:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you man, always trying to switch it up... =D

[wordman]

creative write sin,what would you do

[sinNsincerity]

I would savor every moment no matter what, where, when, why, and how... =D