Hey You!

And it breaks my heart…

Why?

Each time

A piece of me dies

When I give

You all a piece of me

Within this

Poe-try.

Go ahead my loves,

Try!

Please don’t cry!

Our love was at its

Prime

And never had to play

The part when it had to

Comply with daily life.

If you’re reading,

Would you come back for

A second slice?

Or would you prefer

An other kind?

Would you place the taste in

The back of your mind,

Or will you cherish every

Bite and say,

“It’s all mine!?”

The delicate fingertip that just

Waltzed up your spine is

The cool breeze I sneezed down

From the moonlit sky.

Muah!

Say goodnight…

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Even with me liking it I am left with an inability to express my thoughts on what I have read. Giving of yourself and hoping to be remembered by your love as you give freely of yourself. The imagery was very nice. The gentle touch of a lovers fingers can mean so much. iAnd the final question in all love is, is it mutual. Thank you for sharing.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading Mr. Wells!

[Caladoscope]

I really like this piece! Sad, insecure with some whimsy thrown in and a great "Mwah" to end it! Nice.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much!

[Real Inspiration]

"Bite and say 'It's all mine!?'"..The question mark confuses me a little. Other than that, this is an amazing write!

[sinNsincerity]

Confesses what exactly?

[jeannemarie coulter]

`walking with cat feet in the fog on my backbone...well done my friend

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Jeanne Marie!

[Angela]

You are such a good poet!! Everything here is so deep and I feel the emotions. Amazing!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so Angela.
I highly appreciate it!

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Nowadays it's hard for people to stay committed to each other. They think they can replace one person with another far better. All these choices we are given, we suffer and make others suffer because of it. I feel your sorrow and I am with you on this one.

[sinNsincerity]

That means a great deal to hear Nadia.
Thank you so much for reading!

[Jen]

I love this! The world between the lines! Very nice art you have written up in this one. Good job!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading Jen.
I'm happy that you loved it!

[Etta Beasley]

"The delicate fingertip that just/Waltzed up your spine" This was perfectly written and gave me chills.. flawless beauty in this one :)

[sinNsincerity]

Did it really? That's amazing!
Thank you so much for reading.

[B]

Very warm and kind

Good job :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for thinking so Nisreenaa! =D