deifitroM

deifitroM

A Poem by sinNsincerity

,flesym yb deifitroM

,yks eht ti si rO

...ti evoba s’yal ohw eno eht s’ti ebyam rO

shgis ym morf yawa detfil m’I

skaerb traeh evif tuoba koot ti dnA

sdnats thgin eno net ndA

.yrt a rehtona evig oT

?hsarb taht sI

,dneherpmoc t’nac uoy wonk I

yrc nepo na evah I tuB

,em raeh nac eno on dnA

.emit emas eht ta etum m’I oS

,ti timda uoy fi ti evol nac uoY

.ti terger tsuj ll’uoy ylekil tsom tuB

,tsap eht tsap teg t’nac I

smaerd nekorb fo tsac ym gnirutrun m’I oS

.semehcs sselhtrow fo serised ym dnA

,em gnicaf dna em gnicarbme m’I

esuaceb ecaf ym gnittegrof tuB

.edisni ma I ohw ees ylurt ot em swolla tI

!seybdoog dna solleH

,eno tuoba deliaf evah I snaem taeper oT

,owT

...ezilaer yllanif ot em rof semit erom eerht rO

yug sseleulc a ton m’I tahT

,semit ta suineg a m’I dnA

.ti yfirolg t’nod I fi ezingocer lliw ohw tuB

,dezilatrommi eb ot ton gnitnaW

.seye desolc ym trofmoc seod ti fo thguoht eht tuB

deifirroh m’I

...ydob dna luos ym neewteb sthgif eht htiw

,ekil eroM

.deifitroM

© 2015 sinNsincerity


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The mirror image writing.. wow... loved the format. its easy to read but needs a lot of concentration to type it that way.... your style is something unique and damn impressive..
And the subject matter... mortified, clueless, horrified thats pretty much how I feel these days..
Superb :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

It was a pain to write, so I'm really satisfied that you liked it!
Thank you Nazia.



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The mirror image writing.. wow... loved the format. its easy to read but needs a lot of concentration to type it that way.... your style is something unique and damn impressive..
And the subject matter... mortified, clueless, horrified thats pretty much how I feel these days..
Superb :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

It was a pain to write, so I'm really satisfied that you liked it!
Thank you Nazia.
Very ingenious design! It is like an enigmatic mystery waiting to unravel and when it is, it amazes us!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I'm glad that you see it that way because that was my intention.
Thank you Nadia!
But I have an open cry and no one can hear me ...beautiful Sweet Sin, truly beautiful! I actually didn't have too much trouble reading this after about the first 2 lines my brain picked it up! (yeh my backward ways came in handy) lol
Mute and unheard you are so not my friend.. Your words are loud and powerful and we all hear and love them!! Brilliant bestie!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sereena!
That's pretty cool that it wasn't that much of a hassle to read =D
I am assuming I need a mirror? I will review this again once I get home! Good one!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Okay, I will love to hear what you think... =D
I loved writing in codes and that when I was a kid and that appealed to that time for me. I was (not showing off - but I am) able to read it as if it were written normally but I really admire the typing of it into this format Sin. A superb exercise - almost Zen-like - in patience so big slap on the back for that my friend. Uber creative and still with a strong message. Substance and style. Cool as...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

That's pretty awesome and cool that you could read it like that!
Thank you for reading Sir!
It took effort but it was worth it. An amazing, trully amazing piece :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank for even considering to read hehe =D
Thank you Ana.
Ana B.

9 Years Ago

:) Anytime
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Amazing

You seem to perfectly symbolize the difficulty of absorbing and understanding someone and their emotions
A write of passion and longing for someone

As sweet as can be
I love your way
Very smart

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you for noticing hon, that means so much to me!
Whooo... I need a beer to recover after deciphering the backwards write! haha just an excuse for a drink lol... good write buddy I enjoyed it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Shoot one! hahah
Thanks for reading bro!
Great thought and love the dyslexic style...maybe you'll make mirror writing popular. I found a few mistakes, but the fact that they were minor, is a miracle when you are typing everything in backward. It's hard enough to catch things in our regular writing, this would be nearly impossible to do if you don't concentrate word for word.
Line thirteen Admit has a letter transposed. the I and T are switched
Line twenty you need a space between see and who
Line twenty five you have nor I think it was supposed to be NOT
Line twenty six genius need an I unless you meant genus as type or classification
line twenty seven take out the d after recognize actually might want to add since it currently says "But who will recognized if don't glorify it." I think adding It before if and taking off the d fixes.
Was the last word supposed to be Mortified ?

I think that is it, but this was a arduous task for writing I'm sure! That's creativity to even think of doing it much less tackle it for over 30 lines.
jan

Posted 9 Years Ago


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sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I wanted to do one of these for a long while. I actually suffer from dyslexia when I speak and write.. read more
JayceeC

9 Years Ago

I'm a bit dysgraphic which really becomes awkward for a math teacher..transposing numbers is not a g.. read more
sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I bet so hehe =D
a lot of hard work in this write,need a mirror to read lol

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Hehe, did you use one?
 wordman

9 Years Ago

yes i did,had to

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