Drive in Theatre

Like I’ll never get it done…

That is the song I always hummed.

When the day has begun,

Her face is the only one

I want to view next to the sun.

Lovers never sleep alone

And I sleep alone.

Facing the wall with your photo in hand

Wishing you were in my zone…

Waiting ‘till the clock strikes a nerve

To spend some time with you!

Can’t depend on the shadow you cast down,

Please make your presence known!

Making a statement,

Showing what we’re made of...

Making up for lost time…

Treating it as a crime,

So I’m sleeping with the lights on

Hoping one day you’ll be in sight.

Thousands of miles away…

Can’t go wrong

Can’t go right

Suiting the moment perfect

The lasting impressions...

My heart can explode!

Come down!

Come out!

Please shout!

No doubt,

I have a feeling I’m lost…

Oh such an aching heart for this hopeless romantic,

I’m not one for the dramatics.

Ready,

Set,

Action,

And CUT!

Editing the images I kept in my mind for the big screen

Because I need to see you,

I need to feel you,

I need to love you!

I have a greater fear of being alone

Than a broken Corazon.

Staying out of sight

Staying out of mind

Hell and back

I woke up tired

feeling old!

She has gone…

{How did heaven let you go?}

Turning my heart into snow

And then it melted into a pebble.

What if I never knew you name?

But LOVE is EVOL!

Your touch…

Wondering how you entered my soul?

Playing favorites

Searching for a craving…

Hoping you never felt unwanted

Hoping you know you are not forgotten.

The lonely words:

I MISS YOU!

I’ll just leave it at this...

Reviews

[B]

I love it

And I am living this right now

Very nicely done

I bet it will all turn out just fine ..... The person you long for .... Longs for you
It's only fair if you have a feeling in your heart the other person holds it too

So the longing will lead to you both being together stuck like glue

It will

I love this one

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Ms.
It makes me smile that you could make a connection.
I feel I was at least half way decent to be remember by the one I long for. =D

[B]

Eventually the longing shall end and you be together
I believe in love

[sinNsincerity]

I do as well and I fell it deep within.
Separation makes the heart grow fonder and maybe we need this time a part, so if we are reunited, we won't make the same mistake of giving up on one another...

[B]

True

Loving hearts just don't seem to ever give up now do they ?!!

Lol
I know the feeling

[sinNsincerity]

Love was never born to say goodbye...

[B]

Very wise and very true

[AaronFreitas]

What an emotion filled write my friend. I enjoyed it very much!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much.
I'm glad you enjoyed it Aaron!

[Perkele.7885]

When you have something bad, man, we we men get it bad, and I have been there. Oh yes. And Time does not fly then.

[sinNsincerity]

hehe Thank you so much for reading Sir.

[nazia]

So many emotions and then those lines about not being dramatic. Crafty my friend..
And the way it becomes so subtle in the end. Lovely :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Nazia.
It's always a pleasure to hear from you!

[613]

"And then it melted into a pebble." I think you meant to say "puddle" at the end?

This was really written so well. Each piece of work you do gets better & better, I've noticed. Keep it up!

- Brittney

[sinNsincerity]

No, I meant to write pebble. Thank you for looking out though...=D

[613]

Hmmm . . . trying to see how that makes sense . . . Hahaha. But okay!

[sinNsincerity]

I hide meanings in the simple words.

"Turning my heart into snow," would translate into how cold it had grown.


"And then it melted into a pebble.," shows how it died and now remains as a ruin.

I use a lot of symbolism, figurative language, and other literary tools
in my writing which you have to read closely to catch.

[613]

Ah, got it!

[Jamestown]

Awesome piece of work my friend!
Several layers and emotions that you expressed so well with choice wording,
I really loved love backwards as well very clever:)
Thanks for sharing your amazing poetry and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you James!
Did you read the second one as "evil?"

[Jamestown]

Sure did, that's what you were implying right?

[sinNsincerity]

yep, just making sure.

[C.C.Summerwit]

Ah, a feeling I'm sure we can all relate.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much reading.