She Wants...

She Wants...

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Fake hair,

Fake nails,

Makeup on her face,


But she says she

Wants a real man….

© 2015 sinNsincerity


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You are the "bomb" for writing this!! love it and so many girls need to read this and so many guys need to stop expecting it!! sorry lecture..but i see the media today , the magazines etc and the image of women is unobtainable, airbrushed and beyond what any real women could maintain! This does not help.. I worry so much for my little girl.
SO nice to actually hear a young guy that notices this ..rare indeed!
awesome write SweetSin

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Well I bet you daughter doesn't need to worry about that because I'm sure she has a great mother!read more



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You are the "bomb" for writing this!! love it and so many girls need to read this and so many guys need to stop expecting it!! sorry lecture..but i see the media today , the magazines etc and the image of women is unobtainable, airbrushed and beyond what any real women could maintain! This does not help.. I worry so much for my little girl.
SO nice to actually hear a young guy that notices this ..rare indeed!
awesome write SweetSin

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Well I bet you daughter doesn't need to worry about that because I'm sure she has a great mother!read more
Lololol...this is funny indeed.
But who can say she cannot want a real man? If physique aside, maybe her innards are prettier.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I'm glad I could get a laugh out of you =D
This! Is! So! True!
Girls at my school, all the time..Are saying how much of a real man they want, a gentleman, some guy to open doors for them and take their coat when they enter his house and blah blah blah. But seriously...the only thing they're willing to do is put makeup on their face to cover up true beauty and spread their legs.
Finally someone had strength to put it in words, and simple ones at that.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Hah, thank you for sharing that.
It's easy to be conflicted at times and some women, along wi.. read more
Real Inspiration

9 Years Ago

xD Anytime. I love reading your stuff.
very true .loved it .good job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Harpreet kaur bajwara

9 Years Ago

your welcome
LOLOLOL...Short but to the point..and ain't it the truth!! Can't take up for the girl side on this, because if you present nothing short of fake, how do you ever expect to get real? It just doesn't happen? And then they wonder why it splits...well duhh..like doesn't ever get real if you are wearing a mask. All this one knows of real is the image she thinks society, fashion mags, and Holliwood want to portray. And that's men and women.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Hahah Way too true!
Thank you for reading Jan!
JayceeC

9 Years Ago

a pleasure Sin
Nice one Sin, much truth in those few words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thanks Richie!
WOW! Beautiful, meaningful love it. Great job! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading Dreamer =D
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lol

I wonder why do men pressure woman to do all that ?

i love it
Simple and truthful

Posted 9 Years Ago


sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

I know right...?
I prefer my women all natural
Well put. Fantastic. Its short but with a profound meaning. Great job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Thank for reading Nazia! =D
Fan flipping tastic!
I couldn't have said it better myself:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


sinNsincerity

9 Years Ago

Hahaha Thank you James!

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