Mad Man

Mad Man

I don’t write this to present myself as mad.

I am a mad man,

But do note that I am only a man.

Sometimes I just need to write my thoughts

From my mind using a

Pen and note pad.

There are so many starts,

Where do I begin?

Second that,

Where do I end?

People dislike me when I’m outspoken

And honestly, that’s okay.

Some people who meet me

Probably won’t want to ever speak to me again,

And that’s okay because I’m not here for them.

Then again..,

Of course we can always be friends,

Then again..,..,

Of course we can be more than friends

Because you’re special!

But I don’t know if

I can be the one to depend

On,

(My heart could be more than wrong...)

If you let me in…

I can be your him,

I can be your sin,

I can be your end...

I am self-conscious at most times,

Well who isn’t?

Too much time passed

When I wrote that.

Maybe sometimes I just think way too much.

I just wanted to be more than your lush.

F**k a secret crush!

You crushed me hard

When you told me

That my misery

Made you blush.

What the f**k!?

Forgive me if I allowed

Us to move too fast.

I didn’t mean for this to rush...

Reviews

[Midsummer's Pint]

To have done it this year twice... with same gal... how resonating and aarrgghh..

"Lessons? oh i will due them in time" spent during painfully doing so...

I'd hate to say to you "sorry am but same spirited.. newa learn..."

So.. after all this existant being... Glad to fumble to the bumple...

Hope you've been well!!! [i was to put 98 but seven was speaking "You like to sevenize this nein-er..."

So there have it hug it if u feel like...:D I-T

[sinNsincerity]

Story of my life

[Midsummer's Pint]

Now have to say.. not at all GLAD TO RESONATE..:/ i HAVE TO THO BUT IT IN..

If life hard punches kick back and feel the urge of sharing.. another poem..
Glad i am i've not been forgotten...

[Une coccinelle]

I really like this poem!!! You have a subtle rhyme and great flow to the story. I have been there too...your words are relatable on a lot of levels. Thanks for this piece!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm always seeking ways to connect hearts and the only way I can do so is if I'm brutally honest about myself in my writing. Hopefully people can see the similarities and not the differences.
Thank you so much for your words, that carries me.

[Coyote Poetry]

I was called the insane poet once and the dark poet also. I liked the name. Writers will be called many names. If you have thin skin. Don't be a writer. I enjoyed the poem. Nice flow of thoughts led to good ending.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

We're all mad in our own way...haha
I feel you man. You have you undress yourself and be totally naked (honest) with your writing, or else it all seems bogus. Throughout life I've become shameless, but always humble and bless...
Thank you for reading, it is such a pleasure to always hear from you.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and you are welcome.

[MinorArt]

Loved it. Very boy, interrupted.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[Shae]

Very easy to connect to. Nice work !

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Shea!

[Lucifer, The Royal King..]

i like this. this is really descriptive good job

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much!

[Hope Rose]

This is honestly really good. It has a good pace, and it's amazing.


Maybe sometimes I just think way too much.
I just wanted to be more than your lush.
F**k a secret crush!


Honestly, this is a really good part here, and in my opinion the best. Keep it up, I love this! :)

~Shadow

[sinNsincerity]

I'm really glad you enjoyed that part. There's so many feelings in just those words alone.
Thank you so much for spending the time to read!

[Hope Rose]

You are very much welcome. I'm glad I did

[...]

You definitely got style, Sin :) Keep on keeping on...love it!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Lynn, I'm glad you think so!

[E G TEN]

Hello, this is strongly versed, with your signature format and an in your faced approach. Well done, this reminds me of that Irish Character guy in the movie braveheart , :)

[sinNsincerity]

You yea that was me in that movie... hahaha
Thank you for reading brother!

[Real Inspiration]

This isn't exactly set up like a poem as it is listed. However, the writing is amazing!
People dislike me when I’m outspoken
And honestly, that’s okay.

Some people who meet me
Probably won’t want to ever speak to me again,
And that’s okay because I’m not here for them.

This is honestly my favorite part. Thank you for writing this. Keep up the good work.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[sereenaoutloud]

Sweet Sin you stay true to who you are , the ones that matter will stay the ones that don't will leave..their loss not yours!! Awesome write, so honest ..love it ! :))

[sinNsincerity]

All I know how to do is stay true =D
Thank you for always reading Sereena!