Say?

It’s

Not what you say,

But how you say

It

And then…

Will you have the

Audacity to

Say IT

To my

Face?

Oh,

     Wait…

I dared ya

To respond...

I guess my heart

Came on

Too strong

And

Scared you off.

It was my drug

Which one?

LOVE...

Reviews

[Destiny Dreamer]

Oh my goodness! This is a .. I'd say a MASTER PIECE! I just read a RIGHT poem at the RIGHT time! I felt it really deep! Amazing work! Keep it up!

[sinNsincerity]

Wow that's great Dreamer!
Thank you!

[Destiny Dreamer]

YOU ARE WELCOME! :)

[child of God]

This is one before poem it is short but says a lot thank you for sharing

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Stephanie!

[child of God]

No problem sorry I haven't been on lately life got hard
It is a beautiful write as always you are an amazing writer always a pleasure to read 😊

[sinNsincerity]

No worries , I always appreciate it though.

[child of God]

No problem God bless

[Jamestown]

Another stellar piece my brother:)
Format and creativity is of the hook,
I really enjoyed the other reviews as
well, we are very blessed to have the
support of so many unbelievable talented
poet's, keep up the good work and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you James. I am blessed to be able to share my life w/ people and actually have them read and respond back.
God is always good!

[Jamestown]

Amen, you got that right!PTL:)

[B]

oh that is so nice

i love it

it is love

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Nisreenaa, I highly appreciated it!

[andrew mitchell]

Brilliant work sin. very funny to me!:)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Andrew.
What made it funny to you?

[andrew mitchell]

The tone of this poem and the way I read this for me had humour in those layers when you emphasized" IT." Its just me, sin. I enjoyed it!

[sinNsincerity]

Great to know, I was just curoius that's all.

[sereenaoutloud]

The format is awesome...the pause totally dramatic ..waiting for them to say "IT" ... it really creates the feeling of waiting,,,hanging on to see if they will !!
love this Sweet sin!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Sereena, I was really drunk when I wrote this. lol

[sereenaoutloud]

LOL ...so the pause was more a "give me a min the rooms spinning" kinda pause lol

[sinNsincerity]

Oh God no,I haven't had one of those moments in a long while.
It was more of a, "s**t, what do I say next moment."
It came out swell I would say though lol

[sereenaoutloud]

LOL ...yes it did...it came out Excellent !! :)

[~]

This made me smile. yes, drugs can be really potent at times. maybe you should have read the "label" first. :D

[sinNsincerity]

That darn label, I couldn't read the fine print without my glasses hahaha
Thank you for reading Moonskittles.

[~]

:D welcome

[wordman]

a creative write sin liked the way you structured it

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much, always a pleasure!

[wordman]

you are welcome my friend