My Rubik's Cube
A Poem by
sinNsincerity
Allow me to decipher your heart.
Let me take it apart.
From the start,
From first to last,
From future to past.
Let’s not glorify it,
Allow us to start from scratch.
Forget it babe,
Let’s bury the hatch!
I’ll always sit with you
And hold your hand.
No plans of ruthless schemes
Or scams.
You leave me so high…
I don’t ever want to land!
Let us just go about,
Out in the clouds and such…
Let us travel the world,
Or we can just stay,
At far?
Never that!
My heart?
You can have it!
© 2015 sinNsincerity
Featured Review
I really like the poem the rhyming was good, I like "Let's bury the hatch I'l always sit with you and hold your hand." Between lovers I think it's cute because couples fight a lot and get upset easily and I think he's saying to skip the fighting I think it's so cute. I also really like your ending it's simple but meaningful
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I'm glad you saw that message in it.
Thank you for reading!
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"My heart? You can have it!" I love the ending.
Posted 9 Years Ago
"My heart? You can have it!" I love the ending.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Did you!? Thank you for reading.
I'm happy that you loved it =D
9 Years Ago
Yeah. :) You're a really good writer.
Out standing .... Love it :) I love the emotions :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Out standing .... Love it :) I love the emotions :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I'm glad you loved it hon! Thank for reading!
Great piece of work, fluent, fun and free flowing,
Even has a bit of romance, keep up the good work,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Great piece of work, fluent, fun and free flowing,
Even has a bit of romance, keep up the good work,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I'm doing my best man! thank you for reading!
This was very well written. Nice job!
- Brittney
Posted 9 Years Ago
This was very well written. Nice job!
- Brittney
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you for reading Brittney!
Great beat poem written about love, and the respect that goes hand in hand with it Only thing I see is that I'd change "At far" to "Afar". Keep it up, these seem just to be rolling out. Jan
Posted 9 Years Ago
Great beat poem written about love, and the respect that goes hand in hand with it Only thing I see is that I'd change "At far" to "Afar". Keep it up, these seem just to be rolling out. Jan
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Jan, I'm glad you've been enjoying them!
awwwww so romantic is this write Sweet Sweet Sin (double sweetness for this write) It is beautiful and great title!!
Posted 9 Years Ago
awwwww so romantic is this write Sweet Sweet Sin (double sweetness for this write) It is beautiful and great title!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Sereena!
You're the best =D
9 Years Ago
awww BFF Sweet Sin :))
...Very touching and for a 'Sucker For Love' as I am to be,...I have no complaints,...I love it.
Posted 9 Years Ago
...Very touching and for a 'Sucker For Love' as I am to be,...I have no complaints,...I love it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you hon.
I really appreciated it a lot!
sounds like your in love my friend
Posted 9 Years Ago
sounds like your in love my friend
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Haha, Thanks for reading sir.
9 Years Ago
you are welcome
This is such a cute poem David. It is simple and it is playful and it is quirky. Love the Rubic's Cube metaphor. Genius! :D
Posted 9 Years Ago
This is such a cute poem David. It is simple and it is playful and it is quirky. Love the Rubic's Cube metaphor. Genius! :D
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you for thinking so Annie.
Always thankful for your reviews!
"Let us travel the world, Or we can just stay, At far? Never that! My heart? You can have it!" I love those lines... I am in that same boat if I can find that right woman. Good work my friend :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
"Let us travel the world, Or we can just stay, At far? Never that! My heart? You can have it!" I love those lines... I am in that same boat if I can find that right woman. Good work my friend :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you Aaron! Glad you loved those lines.
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