Dreams, Decision, and Deliverance

Love only exist by freedom of choice…

You can say yes and you can also

Say no.

Crisis of diet,

Crisis of dreams,

And crisis of deliverance.

I’m naturally taking in less for myself,

So I can take care of others.

The crisis of Christ!

I’m in my mid twenties and I’m

Exiled by the hearts I wish to love.

Stressing,

Why?

Because the closer I get to God,

Life is getting harder!

Falling on my face some days,

Trying not to be afraid.

Desperately needing change!

Warfare praying!

There’s an enemy spiritually out to derail my purpose.

Not ceasing because I’ll go on forever!

A champion I am.

Advancing to a new beginning.

Not winning,

But I can lose!

I can lose my faith,

So I constantly pray.

Asking for something major,

To save the world!

Hoping he’s hearing me immediately,

Hoping he responds accordingly!

Angels bring Gods answers…

We all don’t get Gabriel,

But we still get angels in need.

So I will pray on my knees until the entire

World prays for the same thing.

Saving you is saving me,

Loving you is loving me!

Reviews

[Isabel25]

"Exiled by hearts I wish to love"- I love that line very much Sin .

Iam more of a spiritual person myself and I usually never pray for myself. I believe god would provide for me according to my actions. But I do pray for the ones I love. The last two lines of this poem are so meaningful and so true. Never lose faith my friend.

[sinNsincerity]

Likewise! I also believe that If I take care of others and love them no matter the circumstances God will always take care of me.
Thank you for spending the time to read this and leaving me a sweet note!

[Isabel25]

Always happy to Sin ;)

[Death's Poet]

I really love this. I agree with Elisa, I love the romanticism combined with the concept of faith in God. You are very talented!

[Death's Poet]

I really love this. I agree with Elisa, I love the romanticism combined with the concept of faith in God. You are very talented!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Shadow! That makes me happy to hear!

[Elisa]

I love how you combined the idea of romatnic love with your faith. Thank you for this inspiring and touching piece!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading it and finding it inspiring!
I really appreciate it Elisa!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Pieces about faith is really motivating/inspiring for me. This is well-done. When we learn to love each other, the world will become a better place for us. Perfect ending line.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Dhaye. I'm really glad that you found it inspiring!

[Rei Ta]

This is beautiful!! Very deep too! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Loretta!

[~]

I am happy to hear that you have set your faith on solid ground. For sure deliverance will come.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Moonskittles and indeed deliverance will come for all =D
Always a pleasure to hear what you think.

[AaronFreitas]

Beautiful my work... always a pleasure to read your writings :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading Aaron!