Heavens Reach

Isa

We dated for five months…

In my mind of course;

Although,

She was engaged and soon to be…

I day dreamed that ! were he

When we would speak…

I will always keep her at heavens reach ~~~~>

Reviews

[Rana]

Those are lines like the tides, low and high, long and short, happy and sad, unpredictable successive words, and yet overall so delightful to perceive, one is glad to surf. I'm in love with the picture you used here and the title too, also could quite relate to the last line. This was a lovely piece to read.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad you could relate and that picture is so amazing isn't it! =D
Thank you so much Rana!

[Rana]

Immensely amazing! =)

[Terry O'Leary]

So close... yet so far...
nice poem!!

[sinNsincerity]

A delightful treat I would never taste...
Thank you so much for reading Terry!

[Sultrysoul]

I've been there before. ..thank you for sharing your work I love it

[sinNsincerity]

All I can do for the time being is day dream... I'm glad you could relate. It's such an honor!

[Sultrysoul]

Well thank you its an honor to read your writing

[Confuser]

Sin in Sincerity: Nice title and the love that was lost; where is she now...does he wonder? That would be so sad to fall in love, and know there is no possibility. Such sweet sentiment...Thank you so much. Dale

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much Dale, I am always so pleased to hear from you.
She now lives in Sacramento CA, and is happily married to the love of her life and I couldn't be more happier for her. It was hard to be in love with her knowing another did just as well, but I believe that speaks volumes about my character and integrity...

[Confuser]

My pleasure....If I don't MAKE myself think everything happens for a reason, would be bitter; someone's out there, be patient and you will see. Thanks....

[sinNsincerity]

I am most certainly a believer in knowing that everything happens for a reason. Everything is interrelated in life whether we see it or not. I have ran into one too many coincidences in life to be blind to a purpose. I even know that there's a purpose for the purpose... Patience I have, but time isn't hehe Thank you for everything Dale.

[Confuser]

You're right, it's like the wind, & you're welcome!d

[Shivai]

Well happens all the time with me, and I be like, why is everyone I want taken?!
But never the less, you wish for the good of them.
Well written, delicate and simple. I liked it.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so much for reading.

[Shivai]

You're welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the below lines.
"I will always keep her at heavens reach "
Heaven's reach can be tempting and lonely. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Emily]

Short and sweet!
Well done!
Keep up the great work!!

[sinNsincerity]

Short and sweet is only half of it...
Thank you for reading Emily.

[wordman]

loving somebody if only in your mind

[sinNsincerity]

If you only kn3w, but I'll tell you... I fall in love with every single women I meet. It's so easy to do so, the hard thing is to know my place and not always take what I want and do what's right...
Thank you for reading Sir!

[Cladine]

That's sweet. Unrequited but you really do love her and all you can do is to daydream.
Gentle words you delivered there :)

[sinNsincerity]

It was a lustful love that turned into an unconditional one. I don't day dream about her anymore, but I would be a liar to say that I never did.
It was such a pleasure to hear form you Cladine. Thank you.