Oh How I Wonder

Oh how I wonder...

If she still keeps the memories of me and she

In between her sheets and comforter.

Or did she only focus on the load of blunders

To only place the vision of us in a blender?

Reviews

[Alice Poésy]

The thoughts that bother us the most - the ones we cannot get an answer of.

It's simplistic, but your choice of words are always so thoughtful. Like the word "comforter" denoting thoughts that will give her smiles and happiness, keeping her warm. Then there's "blunders" and "blender" which seem to clash with one another with their harsh sounds, echoing those exact thoughts in those two lines. For her was it just one big mess?

Very well penned.

[sinNsincerity]

One big mess..? I would hope not...

[nazia]

It must have consumed so much of your time to wonder. ;)
Lovely write David :)

[sinNsincerity]

Very much so hehe
Thank you Nazia!

[AaronFreitas]

Damn I can soo relate to those words my friend. Sometimes small mistakes over take the many amazing memories we create. Stay strong brotha and great work!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you could relate Aaron and thank you for reading.
This was just a thought of an old girl friend that lurked into my mind.

[Jamestown]

Great piece of work!
Short and to the point
chances are you will never know
so don't worry about it much if you
know what I'm saying, can change it anyway:(
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[sinNsincerity]

Thanks for reading James!

[sereenaoutloud]

Fun and awesome all BLENDED nicely ! lol
Its true though how when we separate it is so easy to forget all the good and only hold on to the bad!

[sinNsincerity]

Yes, exactly! See you know what i'm talking about.
Thank you Sereena!

[sereenaoutloud]

Sadly i do and held on to the bad and got mad and totally would had turned the blended on that cad lol :)))

[sinNsincerity]

Indeed we all hold grudges when it comes to the ugly side of beautiful and I have to remind myself that i'm no better...

[MOON]

Ha, ha clever write better apart then blended....

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for reading!

[wordman]

well let`s hope she don`t turn the darn thing on my friend

[sinNsincerity]

Aha! Too funny wordman! thank you for reading.

[Isabel25]

Well....what do u think she would do? I appreciate the brevity of this poem, and the amount of meaning hidden in such a few lines. It has a humorous side to it too. :)

If at all she chooses the blunder/blender option, then it's a good thing you two are not together anymore :P Just saying okay, don't mind me!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for spending the time to read and leave a note Annie.
I highly appreciate what you have to say.

[ANTO]

And BOOM! you did it my friend.
This says so much Sin.
It is pure poetry.
The last line is genius.
Bravo !
:)

[sinNsincerity]

Dang Anto, A bunch loads of thank yous!
I highly appreciate it and glad you enjoyed it!

[ANTO]

This one is a diamond Sin. I couldn't not enjoy it.
You're welcome.

[sinNsincerity]

A diamond for the world.

[ANTO]

Indeed it is.