Writer's Cafe'

Just logged onto 

the Writer’s Cafe.

No Latte.

Excuse me,

But,

-- pardon the interruption…

My heart is AGAPE!

I want to leave you verbal seductions

That’ll leave your conscious erupting!

And it’ll be okay because there’s

No need for sorrys.

Why worry?

Love is never having to say sorry.

And at this very moment,

We are closer than 

close should

actually be.

I was looking for something sweet,

So I replaced my own 

with heavens teeth.

Buried my heart into the ground,

So my Love would blossom and

Allow you to see.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words my friend.
"Buried my heart into the ground,
So my Love would blossom and
Allow you to see."
The lines above. Needed often in life. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

One of my favs. Thank you and God bless!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Ana B.]

wow, just wow! Building into a beautiful concotion till the very end. Loved it :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you so my Ana, it is always such a pleasure to hear from you, and I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!

[Cobblestone Traveler]

"My heart is AGAPE!"
Writer's Cafe in a nutshell. Absolutely love this!!

[sinNsincerity]

Agape, phileo, and eros.
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you loved it.

[Lotus Flower]

Absolutely loved this and the imagery it contained!

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you did love it. Thank you so much.

[Nessly]

LOVE this! Awesome work! :)

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Nessly, I'm glad to to hear that.

[Nirupama.H]

Very creative piece.
I absolutely loved the last 3 lines. Such a beautiful thought!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Nirupama!

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

Nice poetry, made me smile for a while. It's witty and the comparisons were very clever and well thought. Really enjoyed this one, keep writing.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Elizabeth, I'm more than glad that it could bring a smile.

[Johnny]

Very cute, I like it a lot, 100pnts!

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Aleski!

[Tionge Rosalie Johnson]

"verbal seductions" is a great way to describe how words affect people! And, having a goal as writers to impact people with our writing. This was a super fun read, and I read it twice because I enjoyed it so much.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm more than glad that you did enjoy it. I began writing for my enjoyment because it's all I have and what keeps me going, so to know it can do the same for others just blows my mind!

[Emily]

Very clever! Great job. Keep it up.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you Emily!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Nice flow for the most part,

The connection with the Wc is well done!
I can relate to the coffee fix, too.

[sinNsincerity]

Thank you for thinking so Josie!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome!